Remember
Remembering someone you cared about.3 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
That carried a lot of punch and emotional baggage, Harry. I could feel the pain yet the strength of being able to say what goes around comes around. Wishing you the best, Harry.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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That carried a lot of punch and emotional baggage, Harry. I could feel the pain yet the strength of being able to say what goes around comes around. Wishing you the best, Harry.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Well, thank you Carol. You are so right!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
It seems as if emotions still run deep here and I can hear the pain that this lost love caused. You've composed a free verse with an irregular rhyme pattern which conveys a heartbreak as though it occurred only yesterday. Thank you for sharing this poignant write, Harry. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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It seems as if emotions still run deep here and I can hear the pain that this lost love caused. You've composed a free verse with an irregular rhyme pattern which conveys a heartbreak as though it occurred only yesterday. Thank you for sharing this poignant write, Harry. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Debbie. I appreciate your review!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's difficult to get over our first love. We do often wonder what their life is like and if they found what they were looking for. The probably didn't. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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It's difficult to get over our first love. We do often wonder what their life is like and if they found what they were looking for. The probably didn't. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you Barbara for your review. I really appreciate that!