2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's hard to lose a parent at any time in our lives, but it's especially hard when one is so young. I know you carry her in your heart. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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It's hard to lose a parent at any time in our lives, but it's especially hard when one is so young. I know you carry her in your heart. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i carry my grammy in my heart...
she still is the wind holding up my wings
great deeply emotional katauta
cool pics and colours and smooth flow of words throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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i carry my grammy in my heart...
she still is the wind holding up my wings
great deeply emotional katauta
cool pics and colours and smooth flow of words throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This katauta, Many Years Have Passed, has the proper formatting and brings the readers to the days when parents were still influencing us for lives lived past them.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This katauta, Many Years Have Passed, has the proper formatting and brings the readers to the days when parents were still influencing us for lives lived past them.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is very relatable to me. I still feel it sincere to say. "I am sorry for your loss." Your words are solemn and heartfelt with vivid imagery.
I lost my Dad when I was five, at times I still feel the pain and sadness, especially now that zi am a father as well
RJ
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This is very relatable to me. I still feel it sincere to say. "I am sorry for your loss." Your words are solemn and heartfelt with vivid imagery.
I lost my Dad when I was five, at times I still feel the pain and sadness, especially now that zi am a father as well
RJ
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I'm sorry about your loss.
Thank you, RJ
Gypsy
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Thank you
RJ
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a beautiful emotional poem of remembrance for losing someone you love. I'm so sorry for the loss of your Mom as such a young age, that must have been so difficult for you. The image is stunning and depicts a lonely heart and the lovely poppy flower a symbol of remembrance and love. Well done, its really lovely.
Nicki x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This is a beautiful emotional poem of remembrance for losing someone you love. I'm so sorry for the loss of your Mom as such a young age, that must have been so difficult for you. The image is stunning and depicts a lonely heart and the lovely poppy flower a symbol of remembrance and love. Well done, its really lovely.
Nicki x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
Another lovely one, a tribute to those special memories of a loved one, and no one is more important than your mother. How awful to lose her at just ten years old! Beautifully presented.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Another lovely one, a tribute to those special memories of a loved one, and no one is more important than your mother. How awful to lose her at just ten years old! Beautifully presented.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review you understand it well.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
This is beautiful! And I know you always treasure your mom and those good memories help you through your hard times. I feel sorry for those people who lose a parent during their teen years when they have had fights and so much guilt haunts them. Keep remembering and sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This is beautiful! And I know you always treasure your mom and those good memories help you through your hard times. I feel sorry for those people who lose a parent during their teen years when they have had fights and so much guilt haunts them. Keep remembering and sharing!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I also feel bad for kids who lose their parents when they are young. Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
Another lovely poem and one that speaks volumes. The words are very powerful. The picture you chose is perfect for this poem.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Gypsy,
Another lovely poem and one that speaks volumes. The words are very powerful. The picture you chose is perfect for this poem.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend 😊
Gypsy hugs
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Gypsy,
You are welcome friend
Cecilia