2024 Japanese Poetry
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13 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I'm sorry to hear about your friend's health challenges.
-You wrote a good poem for them.
-Your opening lines introduce the storms of life,
but offer words of hope and faith.
-A very good closing line emphasizes
the light that will come from hope and faith.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I'm sorry to hear about your friend's health challenges.
-You wrote a good poem for them.
-Your opening lines introduce the storms of life,
but offer words of hope and faith.
-A very good closing line emphasizes
the light that will come from hope and faith.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God does work in mysterious ways. No matter what happens He will be there to help us through it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and presentation with us. I know your friend will appreciate it.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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God does work in mysterious ways. No matter what happens He will be there to help us through it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and presentation with us. I know your friend will appreciate it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i never understood the calm before the storm thing. . . probably just me lol
i like the image of the calm after the storm
you get through the shaking. . . then you can chill (at least for a bit)
cool lightning pic - never seen a strike that bright before!
an excellent gogyhoka poem with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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i never understood the calm before the storm thing. . . probably just me lol
i like the image of the calm after the storm
you get through the shaking. . . then you can chill (at least for a bit)
cool lightning pic - never seen a strike that bright before!
an excellent gogyhoka poem with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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You made me think about the title. To me it means things seem fine but there is always bad around the corner. It's a saying and the title of the picture lol and I didn't think it through. My friend husband has cancer and heart problems... I feel terrible.
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like the way you've turned this famous phrase on its head and made it your own, turning it into an inspiring and beautifully presented post. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I like the way you've turned this famous phrase on its head and made it your own, turning it into an inspiring and beautifully presented post. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Bill Schott
This gogyohka, Storm Before the Calm, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the storm may be strong, but temporary. There is still light and promise ahead.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This gogyohka, Storm Before the Calm, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the storm may be strong, but temporary. There is still light and promise ahead.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Comforting and endearing words that go outctobyour best friend and her husband. May they look f o r and find that light that brings peace, health and strong faith in the promises of our Heavenly Father.
Well said.
RJ
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Comforting and endearing words that go outctobyour best friend and her husband. May they look f o r and find that light that brings peace, health and strong faith in the promises of our Heavenly Father.
Well said.
RJ
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from royowen
It sounds very much like psalm 30:5 where it talks about though the night may bring all sorts of worry, doubt and trial, in the morning comes sunshine and joy, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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It sounds very much like psalm 30:5 where it talks about though the night may bring all sorts of worry, doubt and trial, in the morning comes sunshine and joy, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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Welcome
Comment from Nicki.B
This is beautiful Gypsy very powerful imagery to compliment this comforting message in a poem. It so wonderful of you to tribute this gorgeous poem to your best friend. I truly hope all will be well and his health will improve. I'll keep him in my prayers. Beautiful form 'gogyohka' short and sweet. Have a great day.
Nicki x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This is beautiful Gypsy very powerful imagery to compliment this comforting message in a poem. It so wonderful of you to tribute this gorgeous poem to your best friend. I truly hope all will be well and his health will improve. I'll keep him in my prayers. Beautiful form 'gogyohka' short and sweet. Have a great day.
Nicki x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from tfawcus
A poem offering great encouragement to your friend. No matter how great the darkness, there is always light waiting to break through, whether it be the sun behind the clouds or the good parts of life temporarily obscured by the not-so-good.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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A poem offering great encouragement to your friend. No matter how great the darkness, there is always light waiting to break through, whether it be the sun behind the clouds or the good parts of life temporarily obscured by the not-so-good.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review, you understand it well.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely poem and a good thing to remember. I recently read that "when walking through the darkness, remember what you have learned in the light", a spiritual lesson which ties in well with your encouraging and challenging thoughts. Beautifully presented.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Lovely poem and a good thing to remember. I recently read that "when walking through the darkness, remember what you have learned in the light", a spiritual lesson which ties in well with your encouraging and challenging thoughts. Beautifully presented.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend 😊
Gypsy hugs