Anatomy of a Marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Anatomy of a Marriage Ch 11"A story of a couple whose marriage is in trouble.
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, the Marsha's of the world can't live with them or without the love-of-their-life husbands, the cheating drunks. When in true life, they'd be off cutting their losses sooner than later and moving on. But they most never leave the problems. They just tolerate and move on. :-)
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Oh, the Marsha's of the world can't live with them or without the love-of-their-life husbands, the cheating drunks. When in true life, they'd be off cutting their losses sooner than later and moving on. But they most never leave the problems. They just tolerate and move on. :-)
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Ric. This is a true story that took place in the seventies. I was my best friend's marriage. She loved him and kept one for a while longer. Beth
Comment from joann r romei
This poor woman, you created a very realistic chapter, thing like this happen all the time with teens, years ago people went to jail for years for marijuana , now they preach the benefits and its legal.
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This poor woman, you created a very realistic chapter, thing like this happen all the time with teens, years ago people went to jail for years for marijuana , now they preach the benefits and its legal.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is lovely and your sentence structure and paragraphing are excellent. Also, your punctuation is very good. May you have a lovely day a very good week and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is lovely and your sentence structure and paragraphing are excellent. Also, your punctuation is very good. May you have a lovely day a very good week and may God bless you.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I really appreciate you nice review.
Beth
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Thank you, Patricia. I really appreciate you nice review.
Beth
Comment from LJbutterfly
I believe I may have missed a chapter, but this chapter is so clearly written that I can easily surmise what I may have missed. Your dialogue is well written and realistic, as is the story line. Marsha has a lot to deal with. I'm enjoying the story.
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I believe I may have missed a chapter, but this chapter is so clearly written that I can easily surmise what I may have missed. Your dialogue is well written and realistic, as is the story line. Marsha has a lot to deal with. I'm enjoying the story.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
Marsha really is going through it at the moment, I could really feel the stress she was under particularly as she overheard her children's conversation. Another well written chapter, Beth, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Marsha really is going through it at the moment, I could really feel the stress she was under particularly as she overheard her children's conversation. Another well written chapter, Beth, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Jacob. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Beth
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Poor, Marsha. She has her hands full with her kid's problems related with drugs and figure out how to approach Linsey about giving Tracie drugs to hold for her. That's a horrible choice.
Linsey, should not have brought drugs home.
I was married to a functioning addict for 14 years and he told me about LSD. I would never try it.. it's scary.
Tyler is trouble, i hope Linsey stays away.
When Addiction runs in the family, it's a good chance the kids could get it. I'm glad dad is in rehabilitation.
He can't know about Tracie being suspended.
Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Poor, Marsha. She has her hands full with her kid's problems related with drugs and figure out how to approach Linsey about giving Tracie drugs to hold for her. That's a horrible choice.
Linsey, should not have brought drugs home.
I was married to a functioning addict for 14 years and he told me about LSD. I would never try it.. it's scary.
Tyler is trouble, i hope Linsey stays away.
When Addiction runs in the family, it's a good chance the kids could get it. I'm glad dad is in rehabilitation.
He can't know about Tracie being suspended.
Well done!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you Gypsy. I've never tried LSD either. Anything that could may my head feel strange or mix up my thinking isn't something I would be comfortable with.
Betj
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Good gravy this is interesting. I am looking forward to more. You can certainly spin a yarn. That is some huge house. Gorgeous. I wouldn't want to have to clean it. Karen
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Good gravy this is interesting. I am looking forward to more. You can certainly spin a yarn. That is some huge house. Gorgeous. I wouldn't want to have to clean it. Karen
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Karen. I"m glad you like my story. Thank you for reviewing and commenting.
Beth
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You are welcome. Karen
Comment from Wendy G
A good thing it is all out in the open, and that Linsey has made a commitment not to do drugs any more, and perhaps a vicaarious lesson for the other children. Well written, realistic, and interesting.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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A good thing it is all out in the open, and that Linsey has made a commitment not to do drugs any more, and perhaps a vicaarious lesson for the other children. Well written, realistic, and interesting.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I appreciate your comments on my story. I'm glad you find the story interesting.
Beth
Comment from forestport12
Multiple conflicts. So much on this woman's plate. It does make me curious to find out how she balances both her teen kid issues and her husband's issues. You've enticed readers.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Multiple conflicts. So much on this woman's plate. It does make me curious to find out how she balances both her teen kid issues and her husband's issues. You've enticed readers.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you, for the nice review and comments. I'm glad you are finding it interesting.
Beth
Comment from Begin Again
Marsha wants it all to be a perfect family again that she's willing to take things at face value when they kids tell her it's all going to be okay.... they may think it is but it just takes a little peer pressure. And her husband...that's going to be a long road back if its at all possible.
Good story, Beth.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Marsha wants it all to be a perfect family again that she's willing to take things at face value when they kids tell her it's all going to be okay.... they may think it is but it just takes a little peer pressure. And her husband...that's going to be a long road back if its at all possible.
Good story, Beth.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I appreciate your comments and review.
Beth