Hurricane season
Trees dance9 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Joanne,
This poem seems to be ironic. The speaker must be very optimistic or is in the the eye of the storm. It also could be just a low grade hurricane
Keep writing and stay healthy. Nice club entry.
Happy Holiday.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi Joanne,
This poem seems to be ironic. The speaker must be very optimistic or is in the the eye of the storm. It also could be just a low grade hurricane
Keep writing and stay healthy. Nice club entry.
Happy Holiday.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you
Comment from patcelaw
Nicely written for the haiku tub event and I wish you a very good day and a wonderful week. May God bless you and keep you safe. I enjoyed your post. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Nicely written for the haiku tub event and I wish you a very good day and a wonderful week. May God bless you and keep you safe. I enjoyed your post. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you Patricia 🙂
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Hurricane Season, has the proper formatting and makes the tremendous weather season seem like a rough ride on an otherwise gentle rotation.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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This haiku, Hurricane Season, has the proper formatting and makes the tremendous weather season seem like a rough ride on an otherwise gentle rotation.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from royowen
Yes, seasons and natural element are warning signs that certain conditions, even Jesus warned the Pharisees that the knew the signs of the natural conditions, but not the sign of the times, well done Joanne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Yes, seasons and natural element are warning signs that certain conditions, even Jesus warned the Pharisees that the knew the signs of the natural conditions, but not the sign of the times, well done Joanne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you Roy
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Blessings
Comment from TPAC
I like the selected ingredients used to convey your thought, feeling a better arrangement of those selected values could enhance its depth even more: if applicable. Something like:
Clouds seen freely by do float
Dance in trees by a forceful breeze
Waking them up its hurricane season.
Just another view, stating it in my given viewpoint prevailing this particular read.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I like the selected ingredients used to convey your thought, feeling a better arrangement of those selected values could enhance its depth even more: if applicable. Something like:
Clouds seen freely by do float
Dance in trees by a forceful breeze
Waking them up its hurricane season.
Just another view, stating it in my given viewpoint prevailing this particular read.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
Hello there,
Many thanks for Your lovely Haiku poem portraying a stunning nature force ( probably autumn or winter season ? ) i like reading Haiku style poetry whilst listening to classical music, and listening to nature sounds in a park or a forest would help me one day write some too,
Kind regards,
Sarah
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Hello there,
Many thanks for Your lovely Haiku poem portraying a stunning nature force ( probably autumn or winter season ? ) i like reading Haiku style poetry whilst listening to classical music, and listening to nature sounds in a park or a forest would help me one day write some too,
Kind regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much
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You are very welcome ; )
Comment from ESOSTINE
I do hear of hurricanes and their devastating impact on communities. I think it's not a good friend to have around. Thanks for sharing this beautiful presentation. Well done, and do have a lovely week.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I do hear of hurricanes and their devastating impact on communities. I think it's not a good friend to have around. Thanks for sharing this beautiful presentation. Well done, and do have a lovely week.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can't imagine how strong a Hurricane is and how frightening it must be Joanne, this sounds like a mild one in your calm wind Haiku for the club, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I can't imagine how strong a Hurricane is and how frightening it must be Joanne, this sounds like a mild one in your calm wind Haiku for the club, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Very nice Haiku. Oh the trees sure do dance during a hurricane! i've been through several and it is so frightening when the trees start uplifting from the ground, roots and all. Nicely written
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Very nice Haiku. Oh the trees sure do dance during a hurricane! i've been through several and it is so frightening when the trees start uplifting from the ground, roots and all. Nicely written
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much