The Spoils of Youth
You're only young once.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Erik
This is a good free verse reminding the young to dream while they can because as they grow these may lose their draw or be seen as impossible.
Maybe if they find these old machines and find ways to refurbish them the dreams don't have to leave.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S If I didn't tell you before, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can just go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
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Hi Erik
This is a good free verse reminding the young to dream while they can because as they grow these may lose their draw or be seen as impossible.
Maybe if they find these old machines and find ways to refurbish them the dreams don't have to leave.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S If I didn't tell you before, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can just go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... kinda takes the motif of 'growing out of it' to a whole 'nother level here. Great imagery for the reader to ponder... Thanx so much for sharing! ;)
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Wow... kinda takes the motif of 'growing out of it' to a whole 'nother level here. Great imagery for the reader to ponder... Thanx so much for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
The young shall always dream dreams and may also see visions. The flow of this poem is very interesting and well presented. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, dear Erik. Do have a blessed new week ahead.
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The young shall always dream dreams and may also see visions. The flow of this poem is very interesting and well presented. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, dear Erik. Do have a blessed new week ahead.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
