Life's Rivers
A Lune (see author notes)6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Katie,
This is a good loon which reminds us we will always come free of our problems in times. Life is a winding road.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good day.
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Hi Katie,
This is a good loon which reminds us we will always come free of our problems in times. Life is a winding road.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good day.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much Joan.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
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You are most kindly welcome, Katie.
Joan
Comment from Y. M. Roger
That they do!! What a wonderful message in but a short form as the Lune! ;) Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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That they do!! What a wonderful message in but a short form as the Lune! ;) Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your theme of "life's rivers."
-You describe them very well as they wind
and "always reach the sea."
-Very well done.
Do you highlight the lines first?
Are you using Advanced Editor?
If not when you post something,
always look for Advanced Editor;
you can do a lot more with it
as far as editing and presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your theme of "life's rivers."
-You describe them very well as they wind
and "always reach the sea."
-Very well done.
Do you highlight the lines first?
Are you using Advanced Editor?
If not when you post something,
always look for Advanced Editor;
you can do a lot more with it
as far as editing and presentation.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for your review and your suggestion. I am using the advanced editor. I'm working on a phone and things are different.
Thanks again.
Comment from tfawcus
How true. No matter how many diversions we take, we always reach our final destination. Thank goodness for the winding track and the chance to smell the wildflowers along the way! NIcely encapsulated in your poem.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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How true. No matter how many diversions we take, we always reach our final destination. Thank goodness for the winding track and the chance to smell the wildflowers along the way! NIcely encapsulated in your poem.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from ESOSTINE
I seem to see some hidden meaning in this poem. No matter how what we believe or not, we shall always return to our source of existence, the owner of life. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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I seem to see some hidden meaning in this poem. No matter how what we believe or not, we shall always return to our source of existence, the owner of life. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for your review and good luck wishes!
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and good luck wishes!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great Lune poem. Those three lines have a powerful message. The picture you chose compliments the poem quite nicely.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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What a great Lune poem. Those three lines have a powerful message. The picture you chose compliments the poem quite nicely.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and good luck wishes!