2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Usually we have a warm moon, and in this poem, we have a cold moon. I find the significance of that as interesting. Once again, your poem is wonderful as is the presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Usually we have a warm moon, and in this poem, we have a cold moon. I find the significance of that as interesting. Once again, your poem is wonderful as is the presentation.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
I really like the overall presentation for this post. The artwork is certainly intriguing. You captured a lovely moment for this couple.
Your color choices pair nicely for verse and illustration.
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Gypsy,
I really like the overall presentation for this post. The artwork is certainly intriguing. You captured a lovely moment for this couple.
Your color choices pair nicely for verse and illustration.
Mark
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
The strength or power of love, compels one to do unbelievable things. It is after all the greatest of God's gifts, and triumphs when all else fails. I love the tone and shades of your poem, and the imagery that it sets in my mind.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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The strength or power of love, compels one to do unbelievable things. It is after all the greatest of God's gifts, and triumphs when all else fails. I love the tone and shades of your poem, and the imagery that it sets in my mind.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I thought you have written a fabulous Ekphrastic, Gypsy. The picture you found to use for this contest is really lovely and your words are perfect. Very well done, my friend. And Good luck! :)) Sandra xxx
I was scammed and locked out of my laptop. It took them computer chappie three days to clear all the viruses. I got my laptop back late yesterday. So frustrating!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I thought you have written a fabulous Ekphrastic, Gypsy. The picture you found to use for this contest is really lovely and your words are perfect. Very well done, my friend. And Good luck! :)) Sandra xxx
I was scammed and locked out of my laptop. It took them computer chappie three days to clear all the viruses. I got my laptop back late yesterday. So frustrating!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I hate when my laptop gets a virus. I bought an anti-virus program to stay safe.
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I wonder if the color green means the freshness of the vines or if it implies some jealousy. I like the use of the verb lasso and the final phrase of "entangled with longing."
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I wonder if the color green means the freshness of the vines or if it implies some jealousy. I like the use of the verb lasso and the final phrase of "entangled with longing."
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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It doesn't mean jealousy. It's an ekphrastic poem inspired by the picture, I should have explained it in my author notes.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from shelley kaye
cool imagery of wrapping the moon in green vines of longing...
smooth flow ebbing through the lines
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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cool imagery of wrapping the moon in green vines of longing...
smooth flow ebbing through the lines
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy