2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, Gypsy! This one truly 'bleeds' emotion from the lonely female lover ... maybe not jilted, but certainly hurting from loneliness... Just the perfect chosen words here, my lady: heartbreakingly beautiful!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Wow, Gypsy! This one truly 'bleeds' emotion from the lonely female lover ... maybe not jilted, but certainly hurting from loneliness... Just the perfect chosen words here, my lady: heartbreakingly beautiful!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review, Yvette 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy...the universal feeling of doubt we all feel about a relationship at the beginning and unfortunately, often at the end of a relationship
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy...the universal feeling of doubt we all feel about a relationship at the beginning and unfortunately, often at the end of a relationship
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very strong emotions from a lover who seems to feel unloved by her partener, and so questions the reality of her own feelings. Well presented Senryu poem
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Very strong emotions from a lover who seems to feel unloved by her partener, and so questions the reality of her own feelings. Well presented Senryu poem
RJ
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
That's sad that the narrator thought they were in love but it seems the lover has left and she can only mourn the memories in the dark of this "vacuous night." Well expressed.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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That's sad that the narrator thought they were in love but it seems the lover has left and she can only mourn the memories in the dark of this "vacuous night." Well expressed.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. Sometimes I get in a melancholic mood and I. need to write about it, it helps. I hope the Bible studies went well.
Have a great weekend 😊
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from kahpot
Longing, distance, loneliness, and uncertainty seem to be the power in these words, so full of emotion, the reader can feel them all, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Longing, distance, loneliness, and uncertainty seem to be the power in these words, so full of emotion, the reader can feel them all, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A wonderful, passionate verse in which I can virtually hear that desperate scream of "Do you care?" As if the whole of nature is against the speaker. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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A wonderful, passionate verse in which I can virtually hear that desperate scream of "Do you care?" As if the whole of nature is against the speaker. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I was enjoying listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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This is very well written, and I was enjoying listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
very cool poem!!
such deep emotions
in this turbulent space
excellent word choices
great imagery
and smooth flow. . .
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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very cool poem!!
such deep emotions
in this turbulent space
excellent word choices
great imagery
and smooth flow. . .
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs