2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "We Are Dormant Seeds".
12 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
What a nice thought that we are dormant flower seed enveloped by God's promise to bloom. This little nine-line poem is beautiful and the way you have displayed it. God wants us all to bloom.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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What a nice thought that we are dormant flower seed enveloped by God's promise to bloom. This little nine-line poem is beautiful and the way you have displayed it. God wants us all to bloom.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the imagery here of how we are continuously evolving and learning and growing as people. You paint that really clear in your writing and I loved how you brought it together. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I loved the imagery here of how we are continuously evolving and learning and growing as people. You paint that really clear in your writing and I loved how you brought it together. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with a fantastic message with us. Yes, God is never finished with us. We can always grow in Him. Your poem and presentation both reveal your special talent.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with a fantastic message with us. Yes, God is never finished with us. We can always grow in Him. Your poem and presentation both reveal your special talent.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool short poem verse!
(and thanks for the shout!)
the girl in the white dress seems very content... like the smooth flow of your words - excellent combo.
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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cool short poem verse!
(and thanks for the shout!)
the girl in the white dress seems very content... like the smooth flow of your words - excellent combo.
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done here Gypsy. Your skillfully written poem in combination with the presentation brings to life the thought of eternal renewal.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Very well done here Gypsy. Your skillfully written poem in combination with the presentation brings to life the thought of eternal renewal.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Have a wonderful day 😊
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review!
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this spiritual reminder. It makes me think of life beyond this sad world which is so full of problems. Our real lives begin after this life when we spring up and bloom in eternal life. Loved your poem!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this spiritual reminder. It makes me think of life beyond this sad world which is so full of problems. Our real lives begin after this life when we spring up and bloom in eternal life. Loved your poem!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your exceptional review.
Love ❤️
Marival ❤️
Comment from royowen
I've associated the seasons of the earth with the life and death of Christ, and indeed ourselves as the gospel of life and death and it's variableness to existences, beautifully written,, well done. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I've associated the seasons of the earth with the life and death of Christ, and indeed ourselves as the gospel of life and death and it's variableness to existences, beautifully written,, well done. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day 😊 Gypsy
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Well done
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful poem about our lives. I love your using "dormant seeds" as a metaphor for our lives. We are born like the spring blossoms. How magical.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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What a beautiful poem about our lives. I love your using "dormant seeds" as a metaphor for our lives. We are born like the spring blossoms. How magical.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day 😊
Gypsy
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I wrote about you in my Fanstory Ball piece.
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Aw... thank you, I will Chek 😊
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so uplifting! I love how you use seeds to share a sense of hope. The poem flows beautiful. Wonderful word choices and such a beautiful presentation overall. For me this is a reminder that even in stillness - there's the possibility for something wonderful.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Your poem is so uplifting! I love how you use seeds to share a sense of hope. The poem flows beautiful. Wonderful word choices and such a beautiful presentation overall. For me this is a reminder that even in stillness - there's the possibility for something wonderful.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day 😊
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Yes, we are forever nurtured by God, and He is one that has always kept His promise, He has given so much and so many opportunities, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Yes, we are forever nurtured by God, and He is one that has always kept His promise, He has given so much and so many opportunities, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day 😊
Gypsy