Open-ended....
Strange but true, unexpectedly.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed the energy in your poem! I love your word choices including "fat bloomers" and "zoomers". This poem has so much personality. It's a wonderful read. Well written.
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I really enjoyed the energy in your poem! I love your word choices including "fat bloomers" and "zoomers". This poem has so much personality. It's a wonderful read. Well written.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, there is no word count in the contest, and this is listed as prose. It is written like a poem, but you can still tell a story that way. The theme, I'm not sure of, and the ending may put some off. I would rethink the word: booty, with our demographics.
Also, these lines may confuse some:
Should I hurl fat bloomers?
Driving past, his zoomers,
Would joyboy love me?
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Hmm, there is no word count in the contest, and this is listed as prose. It is written like a poem, but you can still tell a story that way. The theme, I'm not sure of, and the ending may put some off. I would rethink the word: booty, with our demographics.
Also, these lines may confuse some:
Should I hurl fat bloomers?
Driving past, his zoomers,
Would joyboy love me?
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
