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Thanksgiving Dilemma

Take the good with the bad when family comes.

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Comment from kahpot
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I will be honest and say I am not sure about a few of your chosen words,
(imbibe-venerate) sorry but I will google them, but I got the idea, and had quite a laugh at the end, and yes, it is very intrusive when family demand so much, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
    Hi
    Thanks for the review. I was trying to spell out Thanksgiving, that's the reason for some of my word choices.
    Ellen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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What a fun take on Thanksgiving! Your word choices capture the tensions that seem to arise at these events. Your poem took me through a rollercoaster of emotions! It's a funny look at family life. Leaving a smile at the end. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
    Thank you. It's always a tense vacation.
    Ellen