Comment from
kahpot
I will be honest and say I am not sure about a few of your chosen words,
(imbibe-venerate) sorry but I will google them, but I got the idea, and had quite a laugh at the end, and yes, it is very intrusive when family demand so much, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Hi
Thanks for the review. I was trying to spell out Thanksgiving, that's the reason for some of my word choices.
Ellen
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
What a fun take on Thanksgiving! Your word choices capture the tensions that seem to arise at these events. Your poem took me through a rollercoaster of emotions! It's a funny look at family life. Leaving a smile at the end. Nicely done!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
Thank you. It's always a tense vacation.
Ellen