Father in law
Man to Man2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was wonderufl. You've shared a deep sense of responsibility and gratitude in this poem. It's so nice to read with wonderful word choices and perfect line breaks to emphasize certain words. The assurance that you will prove your love through your actions is touching. Very well done!
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I thought this was wonderufl. You've shared a deep sense of responsibility and gratitude in this poem. It's so nice to read with wonderful word choices and perfect line breaks to emphasize certain words. The assurance that you will prove your love through your actions is touching. Very well done!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Interesting flow of your poem. I had a hard time tracking that it was meant to be man to man. I had to reread it a few times, and then I saw that at the top for your description. It then turned into a feel good story.
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Interesting flow of your poem. I had a hard time tracking that it was meant to be man to man. I had to reread it a few times, and then I saw that at the top for your description. It then turned into a feel good story.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024