Working Together
Ideas for success.24 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Beth,
This is a wonderful poem about how to live life in the office and out of it.
I hope the new president will learn to do all this.
Congrats on placing third in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day and a Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Hi Beth,
This is a wonderful poem about how to live life in the office and out of it.
I hope the new president will learn to do all this.
Congrats on placing third in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day and a Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Joan I'm glad you liked this poem. I hope you enjoy a wonderful Thanksgiving as well.
Beth
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No problem, Beth. And thanks.
Joan
Comment from GWHARGIS
You should send this to Congress. Such simple common sense but so lacking in many. Win at all costs, never admit your mistakes. Beth, this was a winner. Gretchen
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You should send this to Congress. Such simple common sense but so lacking in many. Win at all costs, never admit your mistakes. Beth, this was a winner. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
Comment from humpwhistle
I'd like to see this poem posted wherever business is really conducted. Break rooms, locker rooms, board rooms. I'd suggest Capitol Hill, too, but those idiots are to far gone for redemption.
Well done, Beth.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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I'd like to see this poem posted wherever business is really conducted. Break rooms, locker rooms, board rooms. I'd suggest Capitol Hill, too, but those idiots are to far gone for redemption.
Well done, Beth.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Lee, I'm pleased you think by little poem is worthy of being an business. I'm like you, I believe the ship has sailed for Capitol Hill. They aren't interested in Compromise and they don't know the word unity. I appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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Thank you, Lee, I'm pleased you think by little poem is worthy of being an business. I'm like you, I believe the ship has sailed for Capitol Hill. They aren't interested in Compromise and they don't know the word unity. I appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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You've got it right, Beth. Our government is being driven by children in business suits. Now, our new Nero is stacking the deck jokers. I'll be 77 when he leaves office (if he does). I will not die in the meantime. I'll outlive his yoke--even if it kills me.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow! If only the modern work place mirrored this one, my lady -- certainly the way it used to be, yeah?! A wonderful offering for this contest - great weaving of a rhyme scheme while still keeping your message strong! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Wow! If only the modern work place mirrored this one, my lady -- certainly the way it used to be, yeah?! A wonderful offering for this contest - great weaving of a rhyme scheme while still keeping your message strong! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Yvette. I'm pleased you liked my little poem
Beth
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Thank you. Yvette. I'm pleased you liked my little poem
Beth
Comment from Nicki.B
These are great points and definitely needed for the basis of a successful working team, I know only too well if there are one or two bad eggs its extremely difficult to get a project completed. Well done this is a great entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest, good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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These are great points and definitely needed for the basis of a successful working team, I know only too well if there are one or two bad eggs its extremely difficult to get a project completed. Well done this is a great entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest, good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you, NIcki.B, I appreciate you reviewing and commenting on my poem.
Beth
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Thank you, NIcki.B, I appreciate you reviewing and commenting on my poem.
Beth
Comment from Jacob1395
We can achieve great things when we work with people and sometimes that means comprising. A well written piece, Beth, if only there were more people in the world who share these values. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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We can achieve great things when we work with people and sometimes that means comprising. A well written piece, Beth, if only there were more people in the world who share these values. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Jacob. It would be nice if people who is job is to work together to accomplish something could get along. I miss seeing one or two chapters from your story every day.
Beth
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Thank you, Jacob. It would be nice if people who is job is to work together to accomplish something could get along. I miss seeing one or two chapters from your story every day.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
What a great rhyming 3-6-9 poem! This would be great for a workplace poster. We all need to learn how to work successfully with one another especially when there is disagreement. Best wishes in the contest!
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What a great rhyming 3-6-9 poem! This would be great for a workplace poster. We all need to learn how to work successfully with one another especially when there is disagreement. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
You have penned a guide to team work and friendship in just a few words. The flow is gentle and unforced. I love the creativity you brought to this writing. Well done, dear. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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You have penned a guide to team work and friendship in just a few words. The flow is gentle and unforced. I love the creativity you brought to this writing. Well done, dear. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for the review on this poem. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry I'm so late saying Thank you.
Beth
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo, Beth! Now, could you send a copy to each person in Washington, D.C.? Hopefully, at least one of them will get the idea. I doubt it, but we can hope. Nice poem...
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Bravo, Beth! Now, could you send a copy to each person in Washington, D.C.? Hopefully, at least one of them will get the idea. I doubt it, but we can hope. Nice poem...
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the review on this poem. Maybe I'll try to sell it to a company that makes posters.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice 369 poem. You have entered for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day a terrific weekend and may God bless you. By the way, congratulations with fan story
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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This is a very nice 369 poem. You have entered for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day a terrific weekend and may God bless you. By the way, congratulations with fan story
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
