Rivers Crossed
Crossing rivers and other obstacles2 total reviews
Comment from Gerard F Keogh
Thank you for your service. Correct often. Maybe add one adjective to " I fought a rushing current". But I like it. It has a softness even a quiet resignation to it and that tone is superior for this verse. Regards from GK.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your service. Correct often. Maybe add one adjective to " I fought a rushing current". But I like it. It has a softness even a quiet resignation to it and that tone is superior for this verse. Regards from GK.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much. I did make that line "i fought the rushing currents" to make the thought inclusive of the perils of life. I drove to Texas to Virginia a few weeks ago. The The thoughts for this poem started a few weeks before and played in my head during that trip.
Again, thank you.
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written and it's so well deserved the six stars that I gave it. We all have many rivers that we have to cross in our lives, and we also have many trials that we have to go through, but we all with the help of God can make it through and become Better people for having been there. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This is beautifully written and it's so well deserved the six stars that I gave it. We all have many rivers that we have to cross in our lives, and we also have many trials that we have to go through, but we all with the help of God can make it through and become Better people for having been there. Patricia.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much. The idea for this poem started about month ago and played in my head during a drive from Teas to Virginia and back.
I always appreciate and respect your comments on my work.
Take care,
Leroy