Growing up in the city
Fond memories of...2 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Very good entry for this contest. The childhood here roughly parallels mine in time, but not in much else. I found a couple of typos you might want to address but this is a fine entry in the contest.
father,mother
father, mother
that mom had spare
that Mom had spare
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Very good entry for this contest. The childhood here roughly parallels mine in time, but not in much else. I found a couple of typos you might want to address but this is a fine entry in the contest.
father,mother
father, mother
that mom had spare
that Mom had spare
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this nice review and for the corrections...both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored the sentiment here of a childhood that was rich in love and togetherness, despite the rough surroundings, inside your home there was great wealth, lovely rhymes and fine memories here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I adored the sentiment here of a childhood that was rich in love and togetherness, despite the rough surroundings, inside your home there was great wealth, lovely rhymes and fine memories here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you, l'm always happy to receive your review of my poems. :)