The Struggle
A mother's struggle to care for her children3 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
What a haunting vision you paint with your words.
This had me reading it through with a tight knot in my gut. I feel for that mother.
Well written indeed.
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What a haunting vision you paint with your words.
This had me reading it through with a tight knot in my gut. I feel for that mother.
Well written indeed.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from bob cullen
A story from the heart of a child stuck in a situation of abysmal poverty. Life can be so unfair. You have penned this poem with both reality and sympathy. Possibly from experience. Beautifully and realistically written.
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A story from the heart of a child stuck in a situation of abysmal poverty. Life can be so unfair. You have penned this poem with both reality and sympathy. Possibly from experience. Beautifully and realistically written.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
Comment from Alex Biasin
I really liked this.
There is a lot of emotion in this, the story is delivered in a very powerful and emotive style.
It has terrific pacing and seems to pick up speed as you go.
Terrific read.
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I really liked this.
There is a lot of emotion in this, the story is delivered in a very powerful and emotive style.
It has terrific pacing and seems to pick up speed as you go.
Terrific read.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024