Only grace through faith
A poem26 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This poem is not only well-constructed, but carries in its metrical lines such an important message. The rhymes and meter are flawless and the flow is smooth and so natural. As I often find with your posts, the author notes are as special as the poem, and I want to commend you for the important and beautiful message included in your notes. I was glad you added those thoughts and scriptures. Thanks. MM
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This poem is not only well-constructed, but carries in its metrical lines such an important message. The rhymes and meter are flawless and the flow is smooth and so natural. As I often find with your posts, the author notes are as special as the poem, and I want to commend you for the important and beautiful message included in your notes. I was glad you added those thoughts and scriptures. Thanks. MM
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Nice overall presentation and great rhyming scheme. Beautiful work as always.Well done my friend. Nice spiritual poem.
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This is a beautifully written poem. Nice overall presentation and great rhyming scheme. Beautiful work as always.Well done my friend. Nice spiritual poem.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Roy,
I like the end and some internal rhyme in these quatrains.
This poem reminds us not to forget the truth of God's grace and trying our best to stay away from sin. It show us love is always there and our path is there if we pray for it.
Did you mean speak instead of spruke.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week
Joan
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Hi Roy,
I like the end and some internal rhyme in these quatrains.
This poem reminds us not to forget the truth of God's grace and trying our best to stay away from sin. It show us love is always there and our path is there if we pray for it.
Did you mean speak instead of spruke.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week
Joan
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from gansach
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has such a lovely hopeful message. I especially enjoy finding a new word I don't know and discovering its meaning, in this case "spruke". I had to look it up and learn something new. Excellent job--well done!
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I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has such a lovely hopeful message. I especially enjoy finding a new word I don't know and discovering its meaning, in this case "spruke". I had to look it up and learn something new. Excellent job--well done!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is another wonderfully penned and inspiring work. It is thoughtful and assuring of God's love for all His creations. This poem as written is laced in laced in hope on God. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. Well done, dear Roy.
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This is another wonderfully penned and inspiring work. It is thoughtful and assuring of God's love for all His creations. This poem as written is laced in laced in hope on God. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. Well done, dear Roy.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from Angel Debbie
I love the way you express the Lord God though your work. You do it so beautifully. And this one the picture says a million things also. Perfect for this write. Thank you for sharing.
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I love the way you express the Lord God though your work. You do it so beautifully. And this one the picture says a million things also. Perfect for this write. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
A fine image, and a poem which emphasizes that we are saved by faith, through God's grace - and we cannot judge whether others are saved, as He alone knows the heart, and there will be some surprises in heaven I am sure.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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A fine image, and a poem which emphasizes that we are saved by faith, through God's grace - and we cannot judge whether others are saved, as He alone knows the heart, and there will be some surprises in heaven I am sure.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Wendy,, for these lovely comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the Bible verse where Jesus tells the crowd for the ones with out sin to cast the first stone. I always felt that was one of the most powerful verses. It's so simple yet demands self reflection. This was great, Roy. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I love the Bible verse where Jesus tells the crowd for the ones with out sin to cast the first stone. I always felt that was one of the most powerful verses. It's so simple yet demands self reflection. This was great, Roy. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Gretchen, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a thoughtful poem that makes me think. You used fantastic rhymes in this poem. Question: What does 'spruke' mean? It's not in my dictionary. I especially like the final two lines about our worth in God's eyes. I also love this line: 'for unconditional's the love the salve of grace applies.' Nicely done! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This is a thoughtful poem that makes me think. You used fantastic rhymes in this poem. Question: What does 'spruke' mean? It's not in my dictionary. I especially like the final two lines about our worth in God's eyes. I also love this line: 'for unconditional's the love the salve of grace applies.' Nicely done! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Carol, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from DonandVicki
There are no good men, or women, for that matter, on earth, no not one. Only God is good. Your poetry is part of my daily on going devotions that I loo k forward to each day.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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There are no good men, or women, for that matter, on earth, no not one. Only God is good. Your poetry is part of my daily on going devotions that I loo k forward to each day.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks D&V, for these magnificent comments and a fine review, blessings Roy