The Hotdog
How bad can it be?3 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
This made me smile and corroborated my own distaste for the multitude of sauces.
Personally, I would have gone for the relish if it had just a little spice.
Then again, I am not a great fan of hot dogs so the problem would be moot.
Your poem gave me a good nostalgic chuckle.
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This made me smile and corroborated my own distaste for the multitude of sauces.
Personally, I would have gone for the relish if it had just a little spice.
Then again, I am not a great fan of hot dogs so the problem would be moot.
Your poem gave me a good nostalgic chuckle.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so fun! I love how you bring humor to a childhood experience that I'm sure many can connect with. I couldn't help but smile as you took us through the whole ordeal. The ending is perfect! Everyone has had that moment where they try something new and quickly regret it! Thanks for sharing this delightful story! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Your poem is so fun! I love how you bring humor to a childhood experience that I'm sure many can connect with. I couldn't help but smile as you took us through the whole ordeal. The ending is perfect! Everyone has had that moment where they try something new and quickly regret it! Thanks for sharing this delightful story! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Michael,
Thank you for your review. This poem is based on a true event. I had to make a hard choice as my condiment of choice was not available on that fateful day.
All the best,
BB50
Comment from mermaids
I love hotdogs and often eat them plain in the bun. This is a fun poem that takes the reader to another place. Your smooth rhyming of words captures the fun of eating the hotdog with the dilemma of no ketchup available. Many can relate to your words.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I love hotdogs and often eat them plain in the bun. This is a fun poem that takes the reader to another place. Your smooth rhyming of words captures the fun of eating the hotdog with the dilemma of no ketchup available. Many can relate to your words.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Mermaids,
Thank you for your review. This poem is based on a true event. I had to make a hard choice as my condiment of choice was not available on that fateful day.
All the best,
BB50