Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi John,
This shows how dark things happen from use of derogatory are violent words. Toxic is a good word for it.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow!! So much said in those eight syllables here... A wonderful contest entry as well as self-reflection, sir! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I like this one very much, I am thinking it might be about the recent election, though these words could blossom all over, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes here's a nice short format poem to chew on or browse through and the speaker can ruminate on the sentiments - and an interesting title to booth so start thinking!! Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024