Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry Contest. Only 3 words and eith syllables are in your poem but such vivid imagery your portray. Since you say you love to photograph these birds, I would suggest that if you were to add one of your own photos to the presentation it would go a long way toward helping you in the contest. Beautiful job on the poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
Thank you so much for the feedback. Appreciate you!
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your words really shine through. I love how you've managed to share such a striking image in just a few words. It's a lovely moment captured with just a few words.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
Thank you for the feedback!