2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from shelley kaye
joyful bird sings
'here comes the sun'
with a chest full of hope. . .
as eyes glisten with unshed tears-
as mouths are taped from speaking truths-
as the body shivers in fear. . .
sorry, my imagination ran away and "finished" the poem lol!
cool haiku whispering of an optimistic future. . .
with uplifting word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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joyful bird sings
'here comes the sun'
with a chest full of hope. . .
as eyes glisten with unshed tears-
as mouths are taped from speaking truths-
as the body shivers in fear. . .
sorry, my imagination ran away and "finished" the poem lol!
cool haiku whispering of an optimistic future. . .
with uplifting word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I remember this song from my younger years. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Birds always have such a cheerful message for us.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I remember this song from my younger years. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Birds always have such a cheerful message for us.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I always enjoy your introduction of song titles into your verse ( I would wouldn't I?:)) because they add their own special musicality. And a lovely gem of imagery with your "chest full of hope." Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I always enjoy your introduction of song titles into your verse ( I would wouldn't I?:)) because they add their own special musicality. And a lovely gem of imagery with your "chest full of hope." Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very descriptive and well expressed poem based on the picture. The song is one that I know well, one that I still sing and fool myself into to thinking that I have an excellent shower singing voice. My wife, bless her heart for putting up with it. lol.
RJ
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Very descriptive and well expressed poem based on the picture. The song is one that I know well, one that I still sing and fool myself into to thinking that I have an excellent shower singing voice. My wife, bless her heart for putting up with it. lol.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I love that song! And here where it rains for most of the year, it's really something to see the sun. Thanks for the poem of hopefulness. We can see it more in nature.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I love that song! And here where it rains for most of the year, it's really something to see the sun. Thanks for the poem of hopefulness. We can see it more in nature.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm sorry it has taken me so long. I haven't felt like doing anything, just waiting two posts a day.
I love the Beatles songs. I don't have any I don't like, and they are easy to sing too.
I hope you had a good weekend. Micaela, nick, and Atticus went to Disneyland so it's very quiet.
Love you,
Marival
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a bright and shiny poem full of color. I guess the birds do here comes the sun. I never quite looked at it like that before. You're brilliant.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This is a bright and shiny poem full of color. I guess the birds do here comes the sun. I never quite looked at it like that before. You're brilliant.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome