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How much we need and how much we need to think2 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I thoroughly enjoyed this, I will admit I read it a few times, and still not sure if I fully understand it, the first two lines I have, as "need" helps, I will read this more, your poem is visual and captures attention, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, I will admit I read it a few times, and still not sure if I fully understand it, the first two lines I have, as "need" helps, I will read this more, your poem is visual and captures attention, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thanks kahpot,
The first and third line are a sentence and the middle line is the second sentence. A bit unconventional, I know, but I was just messing around :)
Comment from CM Pickard
A bit of experimenting is a good thing. I like what you've done with this, as a visual person I love experimenting with how the words are on the page almost as much as writing them (not sure if that's always a good thing). Here the formatting adds to an already excellent poem.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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A bit of experimenting is a good thing. I like what you've done with this, as a visual person I love experimenting with how the words are on the page almost as much as writing them (not sure if that's always a good thing). Here the formatting adds to an already excellent poem.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thanks CM, sometimes its good just to mess around and have fun with it :)