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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! Oh, I'm gonna post this on my wall... I swear I think I'm worse than a feline when it comes to 'changing' my routine/etc! ;) Thanx so much for sharing this smile and truth, Gypsy! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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the fanstory gremlins have dropped some "A" crumbs at the bottom of your notes lol


anyway, i like this description of the butterfly girl
such a simple little poem screaming to be heard...

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading have often wished I were like a bird and could just fly away. This poem and this presentation are very beautiful.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from kahpot
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Yes, I feel for the American people and most of the world for that matter, I think there will be many more stories and poems to come from this over the next four years, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Vivid colors and your overall presentation tell the story clearly of a desire to escape the realities of change. This is very relatable, something we all face at varying degrees.I think that we need to step away sometimes, regain composure, and face the change, perhaps with better and stronger resolve to make things better.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 11-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Change can be disturbing and unwanted. How much easier to evade responsibility and fly away. I think the haiku cleverly captures the dreaminess of the visual, creating a thought-provoking post. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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Let's hope and pray that it won't be as dreadful as they said in all the campaign rhetoric. God is still in control and He will be with us and light our way this darkness.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Yes, God is in charge. We can fight the good fight peacefully and we must stay connected.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival ❤️
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Absolutely terrific artwork accompanies your verse!

We all want the opportunity to fly away on occasion. Your post gives us freedom to consider those possibilities.

Mark

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
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Nothing wrong with hoping, God can do anything, but perhaps if nothing else we can certainly fly metaphorically, and I know you are a flyer, be proud of yourself Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊