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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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So good to see things working toward a 'happier' ending - even the belief that it will be helps to carry us day to day... although there will always be those bumps in the road... Thanx for sharing, Barbara, I'm enjoying slowing getting to know everyone (even though I realize it's chapt 26!)... :) Yvette

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the encouragment.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I think there is still at least one more scare up your sleeve. I am getting used to your rhythm I think. I have enjoyed this series. Love to you and yours. Karen :-)

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
    There will be a bump in the road, but not huge. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Nov-2024
    I knew it, can't hardly wait. :-)
Comment from royowen
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It would be hard to imagine that a romance would be going on amidst someone, his love, and workmates at the same time, and solving crimes at the same time. But that would be an important thing in a romantic narrative, so well done Barbara, this would be a popular format, good job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    We'll see if they can work something out. Thank you or the kind review.
reply by royowen on 12-Nov-2024
    Welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This is making me sad that they aren't going to be together anymore. I'm not talking about Noah and Sami, i mean the whole team. They fit well together like puzzle pieces. Really a bittersweet chapter. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    I have a feeling nobody will be far from each other. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Another romantic chapter and so well written. It's nice to see Sami and Noah get closer and watch their relationship grow. I hope everything works out. I wonder what Noah is working on. Smile :)

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    We'll see if things can work out for them. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Sounds like you are wrapping things up. I like all these flashbacks to the key events in this book. What a great way to review how the relationships grew over this intense time together!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Yes, I'm tying up loose ends. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
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This amazing story covers so many elements: trust, friendship, emotional growth, forgiveness, I could go on and on, but I feel that I covered enough of the bases to get the point across. This is a wonderful story with all kinds of feel good developments. Obviously I love it. Great job of storytelling.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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This was a really good chapter. It was sort of closure but you left us with something to wonder about. What is Naoh working on that he can yet in case it doesn't work out? I'll miss being in the safehouse rental.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    I'm still tying up loose ends. Thank you for sharing this kind review with me.
Comment from Jacob1395
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This did feel like a heart to heart moment and I really liked that especially how they all spoke of their feelings for each other. I was particularly hooked on what Sami and Noah would say. Another excellent chapter, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Barbara,
it appears that things are winding down. I hope that they can make a go of it. Of course the time they've spent together is still like a honeymoon phase. Eventually real life will set in, and we'll see how they do.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    So true. Thank you for the kind review.