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Shortbread and Champagne

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Guilty Pleasures"
a collection of poems for the single person

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Guilty Pleasures, presented with eight ABCB-rhymed quatrains, pulls all of the comforts around with the protection of enforced solitude. Nice if it can be achieved.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thanks so much, Bill! It doesn't happen anymore with the grandkids and daughter in residence, but it was nice when it did!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Oh doesn't that all sound amazing! I's a must to treat ourselves to special days of joy in order to unwind and prepare for the week to come. Cute artwork as well. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    They are a distant memory as someone is always here now with the grandkids and daughter in residence, but they were so good! Thanks so much!
Comment from patcelaw
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It is always a delightful time when you could have it we can for you can just let your hair down. Get dressed and sloppy clothes and just turn out all the lights to the world and just relax. I enjoyed your poem very much. Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much, Patricia!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is why I enjoy Sundays, I relax, no make up and chill out in my track suit and enjoy a good book with no visitors. You painted a calm and enjoyable scene with your well chosen words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks so much~those quiet, relaxing days are needed in this crazy world!
Comment from RodG
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I thoroughly enjoyed learning how you gain freedom on a weekend. I can easily visualize all your preparations and YOU alone in your house. Have fun! Rod

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thanks so much~it doesn't happen much anymore with family always present, but it's so nice when it does!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love the way you describe all the little comforts that make the weekend so special! I especially love the honesty about the chocolate ice cream and endless TV time. haha Your playful tone shines through! Especially in the lines about "kicking people to the curb" and "being a pig" - it's all so real! This was such a delightful read.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thank you so very much--I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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I absolutely love this poem that tells the guilty pleasures in life. The rhyming is perfect and the story flows to completion. Nothing better than a weekend by yourself and no responsibilities. Those when married and have kids are the best.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thanks--wish I'd treasured them more when I had them, because now I have family here 24/7, 365 and they're just a happy memory. I appreciate your thoughts!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I used to totally enjoy when my guys, my husband and four sons, would go camping for the weekend and I was home alone. I loved the peace. I understand your poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much!