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Lightning

A dramatic weather haiku

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You described a flash of lightning here in your few words and I wish you luck with the contest and also welcome to Fanstory, storms can be picturesque and scary, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024

Comment from Nicki Nance
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Welcome to fanstory. You hit the ground running with this 5-7-5. Your choice of subject matter is perfect for the format. I like your use of silver in the imagery.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024