2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 248 "Trees Know How to Love"x
8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
So true! It's no mistake that the tree in the Garden of Eden played big roles for humans from food to learning obedience to God and finally, justice and redemption was fulfilled by Christ on a tree. Trees are very special to God.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
  |
So true! It's no mistake that the tree in the Garden of Eden played big roles for humans from food to learning obedience to God and finally, justice and redemption was fulfilled by Christ on a tree. Trees are very special to God.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
-
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
Like a mother or father who love their children, there is a time to let them go. If not, how would they grow? Your verses remind me so much of what my wife and I felt as we let out son go off to college a long way from home.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
|
Like a mother or father who love their children, there is a time to let them go. If not, how would they grow? Your verses remind me so much of what my wife and I felt as we let out son go off to college a long way from home.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
-
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
-
My pleasure
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am guessing this poem is a metaphor for life. Yes, we need to let a lot of things go in our lives, even our children as they grow up. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
|
I am guessing this poem is a metaphor for life. Yes, we need to let a lot of things go in our lives, even our children as they grow up. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
-
Yes, it's a metaphor. Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I never thought of it that way, but how sweet it is. You've really put a new slant on fruit trees, or any tree come to that. Well done, that was brilliant. I love those pictures, too. Love and hugs, :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
|
I never thought of it that way, but how sweet it is. You've really put a new slant on fruit trees, or any tree come to that. Well done, that was brilliant. I love those pictures, too. Love and hugs, :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
-
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed the layers of meaning in this one. Yet you moved between singular and plural. It might be better as
trees know how to love
they don't cling to their fruit
they let them go (OR they let it go)
Very well presented.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
|
I enjoyed the layers of meaning in this one. Yet you moved between singular and plural. It might be better as
trees know how to love
they don't cling to their fruit
they let them go (OR they let it go)
Very well presented.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
-
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I corrected the error, thank you!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
i kept wanting to add "it lets them go" for the third line
but that could be just me - just read a little off...
other than that a great haiku with cool imagery and a twinkling tree...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
|
i kept wanting to add "it lets them go" for the third line
but that could be just me - just read a little off...
other than that a great haiku with cool imagery and a twinkling tree...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
-
You are right, an ' it' at the end sounds better. Thanks!
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, now there's a wonderfully refreshing perspective so very many parents could use these days.... :-) Thanx so much for sharing your insightful pen this evening, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
|
Oh, now there's a wonderfully refreshing perspective so very many parents could use these days.... :-) Thanx so much for sharing your insightful pen this evening, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
-
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
My first thought was that the fruit might be a metaphor for children and the need not to possess but to let them go free. Whatever the case, you pique interest and curiosity with your well crafted verse. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
|
My first thought was that the fruit might be a metaphor for children and the need not to possess but to let them go free. Whatever the case, you pique interest and curiosity with your well crafted verse. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
-
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. You are right, the leaves are a metaphor of children.
Gypsy 😊