The All
This is an effort to capture my faith outside familiar myth4 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is a deceptively simple yet incredibly deep dive into your faith and the vision it hold for you.
The way to examine each part, in simple short phrases, lends a purposeful strength to your thoughts.
Thank you for sharing this
Tim
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This is a deceptively simple yet incredibly deep dive into your faith and the vision it hold for you.
The way to examine each part, in simple short phrases, lends a purposeful strength to your thoughts.
Thank you for sharing this
Tim
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
First off, welcome to Fan Story. I think you will like it here. I have been here going on three months and I absolutely love it here. There are a ton of great authors here that will take the time to help you if you need it.
There are also some assjacks on here that will try and break your spirit. Hopefully you won't come across any of them any time soon,
This is a great poem about all. It's a very versatile word.
Great job and keep writing.
Cecilia
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First off, welcome to Fan Story. I think you will like it here. I have been here going on three months and I absolutely love it here. There are a ton of great authors here that will take the time to help you if you need it.
There are also some assjacks on here that will try and break your spirit. Hopefully you won't come across any of them any time soon,
This is a great poem about all. It's a very versatile word.
Great job and keep writing.
Cecilia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from bob cullen
Sorry, I'm out of sixes. What a great first post. Also, congratulations on finding Fanstory. It really is a great site for writers. Now to this poem, it is long, but more importantly, it is good, in fact better than good. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Sorry, I'm out of sixes. What a great first post. Also, congratulations on finding Fanstory. It really is a great site for writers. Now to this poem, it is long, but more importantly, it is good, in fact better than good. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Your kind words really matter! As this was my first effort to write a poem, I am especially flattered.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A unique offering for a contest that seems to require prose as its entrance, but your poem offering is exactly 300 words albeit a bit difficult to follow in the fulfilling of the contest requirement of 'what God means to you'... The absence of the actual word 'God' but instead using 'ALL' suggests a Jewish reflection here.... well done from a creative and faithful standpoint! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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A unique offering for a contest that seems to require prose as its entrance, but your poem offering is exactly 300 words albeit a bit difficult to follow in the fulfilling of the contest requirement of 'what God means to you'... The absence of the actual word 'God' but instead using 'ALL' suggests a Jewish reflection here.... well done from a creative and faithful standpoint! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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The theology reflects the many years I've engaged in learning holistic theology as a progressive Christian. I'm glad you saw a Jewish reflection! I wanted a statement that anyone could appreciate, regardless of their Abrahamic faith.