2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Neonewman
I believe all life forms enjoy the beauty of flowers in an open field or on the country side. Great job portraying this beauty, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
I believe all life forms enjoy the beauty of flowers in an open field or on the country side. Great job portraying this beauty, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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my pleasure.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hi Gypsy, this represents a charming view of nature, captured succinctly in beautiful presentation in this haiku form. I wasn't sure where there was a juxtaposition of images. They all seemed to blend into each other? Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
Hi Gypsy, this represents a charming view of nature, captured succinctly in beautiful presentation in this haiku form. I wasn't sure where there was a juxtaposition of images. They all seemed to blend into each other? Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Hello, Debbie. Humans are work in process. The juxtaposition is the creator as an artist and as God.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love the image
of a rainbow of flowers
painting the hills
as a work in progress--
it's a cool thought--
nice imagery in the words
and a smooth flow. . .
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
love the image
of a rainbow of flowers
painting the hills
as a work in progress--
it's a cool thought--
nice imagery in the words
and a smooth flow. . .
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
And we're all a work in progress. Only God knows what the finished masterpiece will be. We are all His masterpiece (the Greek word is poiema in Ephesians 2:10) and we're created to do good works.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
And we're all a work in progress. Only God knows what the finished masterpiece will be. We are all His masterpiece (the Greek word is poiema in Ephesians 2:10) and we're created to do good works.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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I know, we are all work in progress, even the flowers on the hills.
Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful evening.
love,
marival 😊😘❤️