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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Neonewman
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I believe all life forms enjoy the beauty of flowers in an open field or on the country side. Great job portraying this beauty, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
reply by Neonewman on 10-Nov-2024
    my pleasure.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Hi Gypsy, this represents a charming view of nature, captured succinctly in beautiful presentation in this haiku form. I wasn't sure where there was a juxtaposition of images. They all seemed to blend into each other? Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Hello, Debbie. Humans are work in process. The juxtaposition is the creator as an artist and as God.

    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the image
of a rainbow of flowers
painting the hills
as a work in progress--
it's a cool thought--
nice imagery in the words
and a smooth flow. . .

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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And we're all a work in progress. Only God knows what the finished masterpiece will be. We are all His masterpiece (the Greek word is poiema in Ephesians 2:10) and we're created to do good works.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    I know, we are all work in progress, even the flowers on the hills.

    Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful evening.

    love,

    marival 😊😘❤️