Prayer at the bridge.
A poem6 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Your muse is a blessing for all of us as you write a poem each day, reminding us of what road we are expected to travel. I pray for the United States and its people to gather with open hearts and find peace and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
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Your muse is a blessing for all of us as you write a poem each day, reminding us of what road we are expected to travel. I pray for the United States and its people to gather with open hearts and find peace and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Lovely rhyming and a tribute to your faith. Thanks for sharing once again Roy and thanks for the notes. there is always a positive message in your poems.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Lovely rhyming and a tribute to your faith. Thanks for sharing once again Roy and thanks for the notes. there is always a positive message in your poems.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Since you mention your muse in the beginning, I'm assuming the poem addresses the fact that you have been called by God to spread His word through your poetry. He's also given you the skill to deliver His message. Because in Christ you "now have worth."
Your muse never rests, Roy!
xo
Pam
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Since you mention your muse in the beginning, I'm assuming the poem addresses the fact that you have been called by God to spread His word through your poetry. He's also given you the skill to deliver His message. Because in Christ you "now have worth."
Your muse never rests, Roy!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a heartfelt and humble prayer that resonates with me, and I believe with many who see Jesus Christ as their Lord and life's inspiration.
America certainly needs to come together in prayer, but even more so, in a deliberate, but peaceful acknowledgement of God.
Well done
RJ
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This is a heartfelt and humble prayer that resonates with me, and I believe with many who see Jesus Christ as their Lord and life's inspiration.
America certainly needs to come together in prayer, but even more so, in a deliberate, but peaceful acknowledgement of God.
Well done
RJ
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
The more of your poetry I read, the more I see how blessed you are to capture the grace and mercy He gives you in your words.
This poem is a great example of your talent and i thank you for sharing it.
Tim.
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The more of your poetry I read, the more I see how blessed you are to capture the grace and mercy He gives you in your words.
This poem is a great example of your talent and i thank you for sharing it.
Tim.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
I found the second last line impossible to understand. Did you mean "I thank our Father ..."? Also, I would suggest line 4 reads "Because He cleansed me, made me whole" as that would be better for the metre and flow. But of course, it's your poem - this is a suggestion only.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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I found the second last line impossible to understand. Did you mean "I thank our Father ..."? Also, I would suggest line 4 reads "Because He cleansed me, made me whole" as that would be better for the metre and flow. But of course, it's your poem - this is a suggestion only.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks Wendy, I wrote this in haste and a little careless, I thank you for graciousness and attention. Thanks so much, blessings Roy