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Prayer at the bridge.

A poem

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a beautiful prayer from the heart. Sometimes the Spirit demands we write what He gives us, to quell the anger in men's hearts, or to stir up some to action or thought. And we pray we can give the message with grace, yet truth. Well said. Blessings. Carol
P.S. Is the bridge in the picture a significant one in some way? It's rustic.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thanks Carol, for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
    PS not really, Just liked the image
reply by Carol Clark2 on 12-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. I thought maybe the bridge was important historically in some way.
Comment from Jacob1395
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I think we must all be thankful for the chance we have at life, it is a cosmic lottery and it is amazing that we are here to witness this world and the universe at all. A well written piece, Roy, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thanks Jacob, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
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Right about now would be a great time for Jesus to show up and,spread His love around. What a comfort to believe so deeply and share it all with your fans! Thank you much.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thanks for these very kind comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
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Beautifully written. You show such dedication and devotion. As you write, you have captured grace and have found worth in Christ. I think all of us would like to see man's rage and fears quelled. Excellent rhyme and word choice. jusi

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thanks Judi, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Yes, these hardships too shall pass, but we still march forward wearing His armor and attitude! ;) Another wonderful message here, Sir Roy! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thanks Yvette, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from bob cullen
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Roy, you amaze me. New poems every day. Do you employ a dozen writers? And so many of them highlight the path to a better life. Your writing really does inspire me. I've always wanted to write better poetry, but now I want more, I want to write as well as you.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thanks Bob, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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We all have worth because the Lord has redeemed us! That's true. Praise the Lord and He has given us a new mission to work for His Kingdom. I especially liked:
"I pray You quell man's rage and fears.
I know these conflicts must be fought"
Thanks for listening to the Spirit to share what He moves you to write.

Zepheniah 3:16-18 (Zephaniah)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks again Helen, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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With all the conflicts we face in life, one of the most difficult, if not the most difficult is the war within. Paul says our flesh is at war with our spirit when our spirit stands with God. That's a tough battle and it goes on daily.
Robert

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Robert for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 09-Nov-2024
    You're welcome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Roy,

Your poems are so lovely. God is the king and always will be. It is sad for those who don't know Him, or believe he even exist. Another stellar poem.

Like I said before you have a God given talent for poetry.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Cecilia for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 08-Nov-2024
    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I don't know if it's true or not, but I saw a headline that said Hamas has said since Trump was elected, they're done fighting. Well, shall see. I pray this battle has ended. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Barbara, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy