Fall Reminds Us
a 2-3-25 total reviews
Comment from zanya
This poem is a very short format but delivers a perennial sentiment in its brevity about life and beauty and the season of Autumn - no mean achievement !!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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This poem is a very short format but delivers a perennial sentiment in its brevity about life and beauty and the season of Autumn - no mean achievement !!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Hi, zanya. Thank you very much for your kind praise of my shortie. Rod
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
These few works are a strong metaphor for human aging and death. So many do die way too young. But unlike the tree's leaves no one comes back the next Spring.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hi
These few works are a strong metaphor for human aging and death. So many do die way too young. But unlike the tree's leaves no one comes back the next Spring.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan. You truly caught what I was trying to say. Rod
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Don't mention it, Rod.
Joan Pechter
P S By the way, I just published a book called "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". There is a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile bio.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great poem. Those three little lines speaks volumes. The picture is a great match for the poem. It's also very beautiful. Fall is my favorite time of year.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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What a great poem. Those three little lines speaks volumes. The picture is a great match for the poem. It's also very beautiful. Fall is my favorite time of year.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Cecilia, for the accolades. So pleased you like my shortie.
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You're welcome.
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love this. The way you've sjared such a powerful message into just a few words is so impressive. You shared the fleeting nature of beauty and life so perfectly. The length of your poem makes it hit even harder. Beautiful work!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I love this. The way you've sjared such a powerful message into just a few words is so impressive. You shared the fleeting nature of beauty and life so perfectly. The length of your poem makes it hit even harder. Beautiful work!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Michael, for your wonderful praise and supportive comments.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 2-3-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This is a very beautiful and well written 2-3-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Teri. Another Autumn has passed and all that spent beauty lies upon the ground. Winter is but a month away and already my bones are chilled.