Looking For Help
A short poem about asking for help.15 total reviews
Comment from CM Pickard
This is so cute, 2-3-2 is very restrictive but you've done well to not only meet the prompt but use the accompanying picture to enhance the words. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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This is so cute, 2-3-2 is very restrictive but you've done well to not only meet the prompt but use the accompanying picture to enhance the words. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Boogienights
Simple and to the point...I like that. I think God will protest his people....from themselves. We really need to start spreading true love and the word of God in these uncertain times. :)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Simple and to the point...I like that. I think God will protest his people....from themselves. We really need to start spreading true love and the word of God in these uncertain times. :)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Your 232 poem Meets the prescribed style standard easily. The poem content is certainly a plea for mercy. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Your 232 poem Meets the prescribed style standard easily. The poem content is certainly a plea for mercy. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a nice short poem that we seem to need more and more worldwide these day. I wish this wasn't true. It is even more poignant with the animals saying the prayer for us
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hi
This is a nice short poem that we seem to need more and more worldwide these day. I wish this wasn't true. It is even more poignant with the animals saying the prayer for us
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you.
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My pleasure, Brenda.
Joan Pechter
P S I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". There is a link to it on Amazon.com at the bottom of my profile page
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt. Amen. Amen. and Amen! I just know He is looking down on us in sadness as we treat his commandments as if they are nothing. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt. Amen. Amen. and Amen! I just know He is looking down on us in sadness as we treat his commandments as if they are nothing. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
I am not sure if this based on recent political events, but it is a worthy prayer for every believer. Nevertheless we have the certainty of His word. He protects us spiritually and allows those things which are helpful in transforming us into the image of His Son. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I am not sure if this based on recent political events, but it is a worthy prayer for every believer. Nevertheless we have the certainty of His word. He protects us spiritually and allows those things which are helpful in transforming us into the image of His Son. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-3-2, Looking for Help, has the proper formatting and acts as a prayer for protection as the days come and go with so many dangers within each door.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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This 2-3-2, Looking for Help, has the proper formatting and acts as a prayer for protection as the days come and go with so many dangers within each door.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from patcelaw
God is always faithful to help his children, no matter that this situation is in their end. My dear friend, who had to get a new job was blessed by the Lord, giving her the exact amount of money she needed for the working in the new job when they had originally offered her quite a bit less. So God is good to protect his people.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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God is always faithful to help his children, no matter that this situation is in their end. My dear friend, who had to get a new job was blessed by the Lord, giving her the exact amount of money she needed for the working in the new job when they had originally offered her quite a bit less. So God is good to protect his people.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your prayer is apt at this current time when there are so many scary things roaming round our cloud. We need God to be saved. Thanks so much for sharing your reflection. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Your prayer is apt at this current time when there are so many scary things roaming round our cloud. We need God to be saved. Thanks so much for sharing your reflection. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! I agree with that prayer and may the Lord open the eyes of His people to see truth and trust in Him and not in a human leader to provide and protect. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Amen! I agree with that prayer and may the Lord open the eyes of His people to see truth and trust in Him and not in a human leader to provide and protect. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you