Winter Allure
2-3-2 Poem3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a wonderful piece of artwork that illustrates the words well. You chose your words well for this short poem. It does show that light can shine and lead you at any time of the day. This can almost be a Christmas card picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a terrific weekend.
Joan
P S I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry. I have a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile page
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hi
This is a wonderful piece of artwork that illustrates the words well. You chose your words well for this short poem. It does show that light can shine and lead you at any time of the day. This can almost be a Christmas card picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a terrific weekend.
Joan
P S I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry. I have a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile page
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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You're most welcome, John.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and descriptive words
create a peaceful mood.
-Good use of rhyme, as well.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and descriptive words
create a peaceful mood.
-Good use of rhyme, as well.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from RodG
Your stunning picture and your short poem take me back to another era where a still night--even in Winter--could be enchanting. I like your subtle use of rhyme in this 2-3-2. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Your stunning picture and your short poem take me back to another era where a still night--even in Winter--could be enchanting. I like your subtle use of rhyme in this 2-3-2. Rod
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Rod. That's exactly the effect the artwork had on me. I appreciate your review and kind words.