Blow
Never a solution; just a bigger problem.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
What you say in this poem is true in the few words you use. Maybe the dandelion bolls are the metaphor for the wish that all addictions are ended.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hi
What you say in this poem is true in the few words you use. Maybe the dandelion bolls are the metaphor for the wish that all addictions are ended.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend
Joan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Joan. Reciprocated.
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You're welcome, Terry.
Joan
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a powerful statement those three lines are. I don't think people snorting cocaine really think about the damage they are causing. They are just chasing thier next high.
Blowing at the dandelions is basically the same. Dandelions are destructive for the environment, but they are also good for the little bees and butterflies.
Great job. Good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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What a powerful statement those three lines are. I don't think people snorting cocaine really think about the damage they are causing. They are just chasing thier next high.
Blowing at the dandelions is basically the same. Dandelions are destructive for the environment, but they are also good for the little bees and butterflies.
Great job. Good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Many thanks, Cecilia.👍
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You're welcome and again good luck in the contest. I know who i'm voting for.
Cecilia
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Nicki.B
You got that right! Very strong and needed message. The cocaine epidemic across the world is just insane, when you documentaries and se the extent of it or even what they know of is frightening. A great entry for the contest. Good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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You got that right! Very strong and needed message. The cocaine epidemic across the world is just insane, when you documentaries and se the extent of it or even what they know of is frightening. A great entry for the contest. Good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Cheers, Nicki. Thanks.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
You share an important message with so few words. And how true is this.
The directness really drive the message home. The repetition of "ro" in "rots" and "refrain" adds to the flow - clever. Great work!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You share an important message with so few words. And how true is this.
The directness really drive the message home. The repetition of "ro" in "rots" and "refrain" adds to the flow - clever. Great work!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Great, Michael. Thanks.