Comment from gansach

Excellent

This is a great entry for the 3-6-9 poem competition. What a wonderful image to illustrate it, your syllable count is correct and has a nice cadence. It has great descriptions. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Envisioning the back story to this poem is heartwarming and enjoyable. The words totally express young, innocent, forever, throughout eternity, love. The sincerity of the feelings brings a smile to the readers face.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing. Glad it. made you smile

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

What hey, sweet and lovely poem you have written. Your word choices to are quite good. Love the picture! It's so congruent with your words!
It's light and uplifting and produces a smile for that. I thank you for this and for sharing. I wish you best of luck!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so much for your review and good luck wishes!

Comment from papa55mike

Exceptional

That clicking together part is very important and puts all of your ducks in a row. What a lovely little poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing!

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Exceptional

The picture, the words, how marvelous. Our confines do not have to limit our brains. You prove this with your work. It is a work of art to be sure. I pray for your ease. Good, Good, work. Karen

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Karen for your lovely comments and stellar review. So glad you liked it!

Comment from Daniel Milton Taylor

Excellent

Great poem. You nailed the 3-6-9 format. I heard a "first kiss" described many ways, but your "all the planets clicked into place" line is a beauty.
Your profile says for us not to expect too much from you. Well, I'm praying for your health and strength because your poem says to me that we can truly expect a lot from you. God bless, Daniel

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Daniel for your lovely comments and review!

Comment from karenina

Excellent

So, how do you really feel? (I'm smiling)

This is disarmingly enchanting. Simply phrased and you leave me with precisely how smitten you were...and continue to be!

When a kiss rocks the cosmos love is surely be in the stars!

Nice job with the 3-6-9 triplet.

Best of luck in the contest!

Karenina

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review karenina!

reply by karenina on 08-Nov-2024

My pleasure...

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

Whether that first kiss is from sweet young love or seasoned lovers, it's always very special. You used the word restrictions very descriptively in your poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and well written 3-6-9 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and I love the artwork you chose to go with your word. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Teri!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest. It sounds like love at first sight to me! One minor typo to fix.

Our fist kiss (FIRST)

I love the artwork you chose for this also. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Marilyn for reviewing and catching that typo!