My hope...
a 5-7-517 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
Hop you had a nice Thanksgiving.
I assume you put the hymn in your notes because it inspired you poem.
It is a good recap of what the poem says. It reminds us that faith brings us strength in hard times.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Melissa,
Hop you had a nice Thanksgiving.
I assume you put the hymn in your notes because it inspired you poem.
It is a good recap of what the poem says. It reminds us that faith brings us strength in hard times.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much, Joan! Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, My Hope, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the road to any future will be rough and treacherous. However, the destination makes the journey bearable.
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This 5-7-5, My Hope, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the road to any future will be rough and treacherous. However, the destination makes the journey bearable.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Debbie Pope
Tis one was unexpected, Melissa. Lovely for sure. Just unexpected. I've probably missed it, but I have never read a faith poem written by you.
You, my tanka lady, are good at that as well. It seems so personal. I hope you are well.
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Tis one was unexpected, Melissa. Lovely for sure. Just unexpected. I've probably missed it, but I have never read a faith poem written by you.
You, my tanka lady, are good at that as well. It seems so personal. I hope you are well.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the message of assurance imbedded in the poem. Trusting I God reassures us of deliverance and salvation amidst adversity. Well done, dear SuggarRay.
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I love the message of assurance imbedded in the poem. Trusting I God reassures us of deliverance and salvation amidst adversity. Well done, dear SuggarRay.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Thank you for writing this. Right now, I'm feeling down about the current election results. I know God will help us through thus. The picture is a good choice for the poem.
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Thank you for writing this. Right now, I'm feeling down about the current election results. I know God will help us through thus. The picture is a good choice for the poem.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent 5-7-5 poem about faith.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.with a nice flow and composition. I like the imagery and presentation too.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent 5-7-5 poem about faith.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.with a nice flow and composition. I like the imagery and presentation too.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Forgive my lack of a six. This is beautiful, sacred and needed. I've been daily reminded of this hymn in these end times. Thanks you, I am blessed. My best for the contest too, dear Melissa.
Sal Xoxo's
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Forgive my lack of a six. This is beautiful, sacred and needed. I've been daily reminded of this hymn in these end times. Thanks you, I am blessed. My best for the contest too, dear Melissa.
Sal Xoxo's
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of internal rhyme in line one.
-A positive message about not worrying
because He is always there.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of internal rhyme in line one.
-A positive message about not worrying
because He is always there.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from judiverse
So striking picture to accompany your post. This contains such a comforting thought. God is there to see us through the storms of life. Great use of gnash and lash. They are not only rhyming but very descriptive. judi
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So striking picture to accompany your post. This contains such a comforting thought. God is there to see us through the storms of life. Great use of gnash and lash. They are not only rhyming but very descriptive. judi
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Nice 5-7-5! You included a bit of rhyme, and your final line is a great statement of faith. I love the hymn, "The Solid Rock," one of my favorites. Great picture also. Have a blessed week. Carol
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Nice 5-7-5! You included a bit of rhyme, and your final line is a great statement of faith. I love the hymn, "The Solid Rock," one of my favorites. Great picture also. Have a blessed week. Carol
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024