Liars in the mist
I really don't like liars , false witnesses and racists.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, this has such intensity! I really love your word choices including "glowing eyes" and "liars in the mist". I gives the poem a mysterious and eerie atmosphere. I appreciate your direct approach in addressing this. It feels raw and honest. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait to see where your writing takes you next!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Wow, this has such intensity! I really love your word choices including "glowing eyes" and "liars in the mist". I gives the poem a mysterious and eerie atmosphere. I appreciate your direct approach in addressing this. It feels raw and honest. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait to see where your writing takes you next!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
Your poem makes me think, I like that. It is a bit confusing in the third stanza. I pray everyday, people see each other's soul and not the color of their coat. Unfortunately not everyone thinks that way, we are not in a perfect world.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Your poem makes me think, I like that. It is a bit confusing in the third stanza. I pray everyday, people see each other's soul and not the color of their coat. Unfortunately not everyone thinks that way, we are not in a perfect world.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you