Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"elder's kindred spirit" what a wonderful image your last line gives, as we imagine the elderly looking out from their home and reminiscing, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

oooh cool - love daisies
and the thought of them being kindred spirits is a cool image
a great haiku with smooth flow

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

I like your thought processes for composing this Haiku.

IMHO 'rest home' (or 'old age' home) is an antiquated term. Keeping to short-long short syllabled lines for our Haiku consider:
'retirement home'

Mark

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

I can just imagine how long that old oak has witnessed that special bond between the elders who gather within, and share the feeling with it. I have always felt strongly about long living trees, and very sad when they are cut down for no good reason. Beautiful haiku.
RJ

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 04-Nov-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, some of those trees live such a long time, much longer than humans. I can imagine that the elderly feeling a kinship with trees which have seen the same decades they lived through.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thank you very much 😊 big sister

❤️ Marival