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Comment from RJ Heritage
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I can't say that I really understand this one, but it feels like if her longing for the things which her marriage band symbolize, gives her the strength to weather those life storms. It is beautifully presented.
RJ

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Yes, that's right, she means for her husband

    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 04-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Can't say I can presently relate to this one, Gypsy... Maybe a few years ago twas so... Another wonderful addition to your collection, my lady -- thanx for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much, 😊
    It's fiction, I can't relate either but maybe someone else will.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katiemae1977
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Wistful heart. I haven't seen the word wistful in a long time. I like the fact that her marriage band is her lifesaver.
Very well done Gypsy.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That's a gorgeous picture! I am contemplating what that wedding band did. Usually, that keeps unwanted attention away. But perhaps it is a symbol of the security she has in marriage?

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Yes, the security of a healthy marriage, obviously it's fiction. LoL

    Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you had a great weekend. Mine was busy but it was wonderful to see all my family, except Bella who lives in Florida.

    Love ❤️

    Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
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aw this was so sweet
never though of a wedding band being a life-saver...
it can be!
great analogy!
cool haiku for the pic - love the wistful heart riding raging waves image
an excellent post with no revisions needed

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    It's obviously fiction lol I never had a good marriage.
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy hugs