Comment from EmileJP

Excellent

An eternal, "Managua Tau ", I'm trying to figure out the down side, (LOL). This jerks at our funny bone in innocent fun. The imagery and story line presented is humorous and strikes a cord in our collective memories and hearts ending with a chuckle.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006

Thank you for taking the time to review my poem. I had loads of fun writing it and I am glad that you enjoyed it as much as I did. Now, I need to see what other twisted works I can come up with! :-P

Comment from mblundell68

Excellent

A little bit of twisted humor
Poetry, Dreams In Motion.

Interesting poem; interesting dream or not?
Keep up your writing!
Excellent poem!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006

Thank you for such a great review! I am so glad that you enjoyed it and found it worth 5 stars. I have to admit, I didn't expect such high marks with this one as it was a littlw wierd. But, as usual, humor prevails! lol.

Comment from Barbara-Anne

Excellent

This was quite a fun, twisted poem :-) You have a great rhythm and your partial rhyme works very well. You have painted a very vivid picture, and funnily enough it isn't a movie in my head but a painting... I wish I could paint! It is a masterpiece.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006

Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it. I thought it was pretty funy myself and almost elaboated more on it... but I figured a good writer knows when to stop! LOL
I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. Your comments have brightened my day! :-)