Dodie Rae
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Thank you, God."A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
9 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another outstanding chapter that's entertaining from beginning to end. Something that's real important to me an impatient one.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks for sharing another outstanding chapter that's entertaining from beginning to end. Something that's real important to me an impatient one.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Ric, for always being so kind with your reviews. I am pleased that you enjoy the story. This reveiw has made my day, my friend. Thank you for the extra stars.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Jim Wile
This was a well-conceived chapter, Steve. Dodie Rae and Bay Lynn came up with a plausible explanation of her presence at the Riley's and the appearance and disappearance of her car. I guess I didn't realize until now that it might have been Riley who had been abused, not the other way around. Neat twist.
I'm amused by Dodie Rae's reaction to Mama's news that she killed Riley. She had wanted to do it! Ah, Dodie Rae. Ya gotta love her. At least she seemed relieved to find out he wasn't dead after all when she found out he might be innocent. There's hope for that girl yet.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This was a well-conceived chapter, Steve. Dodie Rae and Bay Lynn came up with a plausible explanation of her presence at the Riley's and the appearance and disappearance of her car. I guess I didn't realize until now that it might have been Riley who had been abused, not the other way around. Neat twist.
I'm amused by Dodie Rae's reaction to Mama's news that she killed Riley. She had wanted to do it! Ah, Dodie Rae. Ya gotta love her. At least she seemed relieved to find out he wasn't dead after all when she found out he might be innocent. There's hope for that girl yet.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Jim, for this incredible review, my friend. Dodie Rae has a soft side. I think the confidence the wolf has given her took her to new levels. Now, I believe she will show a more compassionate side, as she has in this chapter. But I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens, lol.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What in the world! That was the biggest twist ever! I never would have seen that coming and I love it! Way to keep the intrigue up, Steve! Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What in the world! That was the biggest twist ever! I never would have seen that coming and I love it! Way to keep the intrigue up, Steve! Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn, for this exceptional review, my friend. I love being surprised when reading and even more when I'm the one writing the surprise. I have many to come.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Jacob1395
I like how Dodie Rae has transformed into a new person at the end of this piece, although I could feel her anger at her grandmother earlier for being the person to kill Officer Riley instead of her. An excellent piece, Steve. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I like how Dodie Rae has transformed into a new person at the end of this piece, although I could feel her anger at her grandmother earlier for being the person to kill Officer Riley instead of her. An excellent piece, Steve. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Jacob, fo this incredible review, my friend. I think that Dodie Rae has always been a great person with a lot of issues. I think the Wolf has given her the confidence she needed. However, once she felt invincible, she became a bit too ballsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from GWHARGIS
You never disappoint, Steve. This was another riveting chapter in a book about a woman who i don't know if I'm rooting for her or against her. While I understand her anger and pain, i wonder if she's doing this vigilante stuff for others or for herself. I loved the prayer for Riley at the end. Nice touch. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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You never disappoint, Steve. This was another riveting chapter in a book about a woman who i don't know if I'm rooting for her or against her. While I understand her anger and pain, i wonder if she's doing this vigilante stuff for others or for herself. I loved the prayer for Riley at the end. Nice touch. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen, for this beautiful six-star review, my friend. I think that Dodie Rae's reasons are combined. She's on both sides of the fence, I'd say. I believe she will define her true reasons in future chapters.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
She was locked up, no one would ever guess her momma, so things will be fine. Being Riley's wife is a beater. maybe she can be Looked at" by the law. how did your halloween do?
Karen
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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She was locked up, no one would ever guess her momma, so things will be fine. Being Riley's wife is a beater. maybe she can be Looked at" by the law. how did your halloween do?
Karen
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Karen, for this incredible review, my friend. Unfortunately, I worked on Halloween. We don't usually have trick-or-treaters anymore. Everyone goes to the churches for trunk-or-treat. I hope yours was better. Dodie Rae being in jail is the ultimate alibi, lol.
God bless,
Steve
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I slept through Halloween. I am in apts, and no one decorated or expected little ones. Bummer. Karen
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Awe! Not like the good old days when we were growing up.
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Kids don't get to have childhood. :-(
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I know! It's so sad. I enjoyed mine so much.
Comment from royowen
Things seem to be working out for Dodie Rae and Bay Lyn, But did Dodie Rae do something stupid when she walked toward the ICU to find out if Officer Riley was OK, and encountered Officer Carey, perhaps, but maybe you've got something up your sleeve, well done, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Things seem to be working out for Dodie Rae and Bay Lyn, But did Dodie Rae do something stupid when she walked toward the ICU to find out if Officer Riley was OK, and encountered Officer Carey, perhaps, but maybe you've got something up your sleeve, well done, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Roy, for the excellent review. I felt it wasn't the brightest thing to do, but her curiosity got the better of her, and now she regrets it.
God bless,
Steve
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad to see Dodie Rae show some compassion for Riley. I really like this story.
before the Judge. Dodie Rae thanked the Judge (because of 'the' it's 'judge'.)
followed him home, and I killed him." she sobbed. (She sobbed.)
"Where's Officer Riley?" She said, noticing the tension in Carey's back at the mention of his partner (she said,)
he shouted, pointing at the ICU wing." (omit quotation marks)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I'm glad to see Dodie Rae show some compassion for Riley. I really like this story.
before the Judge. Dodie Rae thanked the Judge (because of 'the' it's 'judge'.)
followed him home, and I killed him." she sobbed. (She sobbed.)
"Where's Officer Riley?" She said, noticing the tension in Carey's back at the mention of his partner (she said,)
he shouted, pointing at the ICU wing." (omit quotation marks)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Barbara, for this excellent, helpful review, my friend. I agree; Dodie Rae was long overdue for compassion with Riley. It goes to show that we never really know what one is going through.
I have edited the issues, but I can't figure out the before-the-judge issues.
God bless,
Steve
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If you just said Judge, it would be capitalized, but when you say the judge, the 'the' causes it to be lowercase.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
If Riley says it was a woman and thinks it could be Dodie Rae, he will have to rethink his thoughts on her when he's told she was in jail. Things are getting harder to stay in the clear. Now Mama has gone home, that might be good. But, what if Mama gets home and sees other men abusing women, will she carry on killing there? This opens so many possibilities. Another great chapter, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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If Riley says it was a woman and thinks it could be Dodie Rae, he will have to rethink his thoughts on her when he's told she was in jail. Things are getting harder to stay in the clear. Now Mama has gone home, that might be good. But, what if Mama gets home and sees other men abusing women, will she carry on killing there? This opens so many possibilities. Another great chapter, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Sandra, for this incredible review. This definitely opens up many possibilities. I have a few other surprises up my sleeves, lol.
God bless,
Steve
