2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Katiemae1977
They grow something alright but I never hung on to a pumpkin long enough to find out.
This is a cute and definitely a short haiku.
Well done Gypsy!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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They grow something alright but I never hung on to a pumpkin long enough to find out.
This is a cute and definitely a short haiku.
Well done Gypsy!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Neonewman
Heh! Heh!
Yes, they do. What a brilliant short you have created, Gypsy. But, I've come to expect this from you, my friend. You have a fantastic gift.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Heh! Heh!
Yes, they do. What a brilliant short you have created, Gypsy. But, I've come to expect this from you, my friend. You have a fantastic gift.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
lol! never thought of moldy beards before. . . and now i can't unthink of it LOL!
cool two-like haiku
may i suggest a four-line one?
"a week after halloween---
[pumpkin picture in the middle]
pumpkins
g r o w
beards"
[kinda like a beard]
eh, just a thought lol ;-)
great haiku!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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lol! never thought of moldy beards before. . . and now i can't unthink of it LOL!
cool two-like haiku
may i suggest a four-line one?
"a week after halloween---
[pumpkin picture in the middle]
pumpkins
g r o w
beards"
[kinda like a beard]
eh, just a thought lol ;-)
great haiku!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I changed the plural beards. I don't understand the other suggestions.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Do they? O, I think I have noticed some of their left in seeds sprouting, linda looked like a beard. I know that my friend use the oil to help hair grow in patches where he has lost hair. Anyway, well presented thoughts.
RJ
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Do they? O, I think I have noticed some of their left in seeds sprouting, linda looked like a beard. I know that my friend use the oil to help hair grow in patches where he has lost hair. Anyway, well presented thoughts.
RJ
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Old cut up pumpkins get ugly after a while.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from l.raven
Hi Marival, you are the Master of Haiku poetry
my sweet friend...
your poem reminded me of the pumpkins at the
home where I babysit...after a week of Halloween...
your pumpkins grew a beard...the squirrels and rabbits
eat most of their pumpkins...I was glad to see them get
eaten...and not just thrown away...
I love you poem beautiful you...and love your picture...
very well thought of...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Hi Marival, you are the Master of Haiku poetry
my sweet friend...
your poem reminded me of the pumpkins at the
home where I babysit...after a week of Halloween...
your pumpkins grew a beard...the squirrels and rabbits
eat most of their pumpkins...I was glad to see them get
eaten...and not just thrown away...
I love you poem beautiful you...and love your picture...
very well thought of...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Linda 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Marival ❤️
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always welcome you...love ya...xxoo
❤️🤗🌹
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. They grow more than beards and they wrinkle and shrivel, too! But if you put them in the garden, they will come back the next year! Enjoyed your fun post-Halloween poem!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Lol. They grow more than beards and they wrinkle and shrivel, too! But if you put them in the garden, they will come back the next year! Enjoyed your fun post-Halloween poem!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I wish we had a garden, that's a great idea.
Thank you very much, big sister ❤️
Love you
Marival
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! They do look menacing and I don't think I'd like to see them with their week old facial hair! Once again you make me smile with your lovely, imaginative and rather surreal humour! take care Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Haha! They do look menacing and I don't think I'd like to see them with their week old facial hair! Once again you make me smile with your lovely, imaginative and rather surreal humour! take care Debbie
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy I made you laugh.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And sagging facial features... lol! ;) A fun offering for the season, Lady G, who knew fruit could have fur, eh? ;) ;) Thanx for sharing that smile! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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And sagging facial features... lol! ;) A fun offering for the season, Lady G, who knew fruit could have fur, eh? ;) ;) Thanx for sharing that smile! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy I made you laugh.
Gypsy hugs