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Comment from Katiemae1977
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No wonder they're angry. Just plastic flowers. My mom was an avid gardener and we always had huge bees buzzing about. I was terrified of them.
This is fun and humorous.
Well done
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Neonewman
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OMG! I love the artwork you've chosen. I would love to have that on a shirt along with your humorous Haiku. I also love the honey dripping from his hands and beneath the artwork.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
reply by Neonewman on 05-Nov-2024
    My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
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maybe that's why the bees are angry. . . they want real flowers lol

cool and fun haiku - love watching bees!

cute little bee. . . thank you for sharing!

shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Marival, LOL sweet girl...it sounds
like if I were a bee...that would be my luck...
come to get some pollen...and I get mouth full
of plastic...

love your poem wonderful you...very well written...
and I loveeee this picture...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊 Linda. It's good to hear from you.

    Marival ❤️
reply by l.raven on 04-Nov-2024
    your soooo welcome Marival...love xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
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LoL ! Yep, those bees would not be happy if they were fooled by plastic flowers!
I'm guessing they must of smelled some perfume to be drawn to those flowers!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    LoL I was in a mood today. Thank you very much, big sister.

    ❤️ Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
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That is so funny! The only time I encountered angry bees was on my sister's porch, they were African bees, and gave chase, but I escaped by running into my car. Of course, this was m any years ago.
Nice one, made me laugh.
RJ

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy I made you laugh.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by RJ Heritage on 03-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from CM Pickard
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You pulled this off brilliantly, for me it's a great little haiku and felt the pa & pa's front porch centred the emotion in it. Nothing to change here, you are obviously an expert at this form of poetry.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Haha! Love it! And especially the honey dripping down! They've every good reason to be angry with those pesky plastic flowers! Thanks, Gypsy, for making me smile:) Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Hehe

    Gypsy hugs