Anatomy of a Marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Anatomy of a Marriage Ch.9"A story of a couple whose marriage is in trouble.
20 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Beth,
I love your story. It's engaging and it flows nicely. The characters are well developed.
Marsha did a good job talking to the principal and dealing with her daughter, Tracy. Poor thing is in a terrible situation. I wonder what is next.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hello, Beth,
I love your story. It's engaging and it flows nicely. The characters are well developed.
Marsha did a good job talking to the principal and dealing with her daughter, Tracy. Poor thing is in a terrible situation. I wonder what is next.
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my story. It is based on close friend's true story, but I changed names and guessed the dialogue.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
I like everything you write, your style and word choices always make what you're saying ring true to me. Which might have a lot to do with you as a person that I think I've come to know a little. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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I like everything you write, your style and word choices always make what you're saying ring true to me. Which might have a lot to do with you as a person that I think I've come to know a little. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Marsha seems to have a lot on her plate just now, her husband in rehab, one daughter with drugs and another accused of hold drugs for her at school. Oh my goodness, how is she going to unravel all this trauma! A fine story becoming more and more difficult for Marsha, who said women are the weaker sex? I thoroughly enjoyed your chapter Beth, love Dolly x
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Marsha seems to have a lot on her plate just now, her husband in rehab, one daughter with drugs and another accused of hold drugs for her at school. Oh my goodness, how is she going to unravel all this trauma! A fine story becoming more and more difficult for Marsha, who said women are the weaker sex? I thoroughly enjoyed your chapter Beth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Beth,
Your excellent chapter is so pertinent. Drugs are so dangerous -/especially LSD. I had a family member who tried it and had a bad trip. Despite that, he lead a productive life.
I like the way your story unfolds -/ about illegal drugs and infidelity.
Good luck with this book, Beth.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Beth,
Your excellent chapter is so pertinent. Drugs are so dangerous -/especially LSD. I had a family member who tried it and had a bad trip. Despite that, he lead a productive life.
I like the way your story unfolds -/ about illegal drugs and infidelity.
Good luck with this book, Beth.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Very nicely and I enjoyed very much listening to your presentation is good your sentence structure and your paragraph excellent and your punctuation makes it for a very good listening to read. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Very nicely and I enjoyed very much listening to your presentation is good your sentence structure and your paragraph excellent and your punctuation makes it for a very good listening to read. Patricia.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I'm glad you are still listening to my story.
Beth
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Great chapter, Beth. So much going on. For one thing it sure sounds to me like the daughter was set-up for a fall. Although if she really did show them to another kid that wasn't very smart on her part. The caller on the phone is concerning and I know what we all assume but I think it is something we wouldn't expect. Time will tell. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Great chapter, Beth. So much going on. For one thing it sure sounds to me like the daughter was set-up for a fall. Although if she really did show them to another kid that wasn't very smart on her part. The caller on the phone is concerning and I know what we all assume but I think it is something we wouldn't expect. Time will tell. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. This was an excellent review with insightful comments. I appreciate the six stars.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering if this caller wasn't Trenton's girlfriend and she's pregnant. Hmm, an interesting twist and now drugs. Can't wait to read more.
Marsha took a deep breath and finally spoke. You can't imagine what a shock this is for me. I can understand your policy, but I'm sure these aren't hers. (missing beginning quotation marks, "You can't)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I'm wondering if this caller wasn't Trenton's girlfriend and she's pregnant. Hmm, an interesting twist and now drugs. Can't wait to read more.
Marsha took a deep breath and finally spoke. You can't imagine what a shock this is for me. I can understand your policy, but I'm sure these aren't hers. (missing beginning quotation marks, "You can't)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I glad you are still enjoying my story.
Beth
Comment from royowen
That's always problematic when one of the marriage partners decides to be less that forthcoming in a relationship, when trouble emerges, like this mysterious female, all sorts of possibilities arise, especially with her precious young being caught with drugs in her possession, great story Beth, blessings Roy
Typo : I'll see if (he) wants to...
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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That's always problematic when one of the marriage partners decides to be less that forthcoming in a relationship, when trouble emerges, like this mysterious female, all sorts of possibilities arise, especially with her precious young being caught with drugs in her possession, great story Beth, blessings Roy
Typo : I'll see if (he) wants to...
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Roy. As usual your comments are always inciteful and I appreciate them.
Beth
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Well done
Comment from jim vecchio
Marsha sure has her set of problems. I hope the marijuana situation turns out to be something innocent. Now this strange person phones. is Marsha doomed for trouble with her husband and with her daughter?
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Marsha sure has her set of problems. I hope the marijuana situation turns out to be something innocent. Now this strange person phones. is Marsha doomed for trouble with her husband and with her daughter?
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you Jim, I hope to eventually catch up on the back reviews. I still have over a 100 to acknowledge.
Beth
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Please do not feel obligated to always respond to mine. I am very overloaded, too. I'm grateful for your writing.
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Sounds as if she has a full day wrapped up in just a few minutes of problems Drugs has caused our nation more problems than a person could ever know. We never knew such in our day. Marijuana to us was a town somewhere in Mexico. Good one , Beth.
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Sounds as if she has a full day wrapped up in just a few minutes of problems Drugs has caused our nation more problems than a person could ever know. We never knew such in our day. Marijuana to us was a town somewhere in Mexico. Good one , Beth.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024