The Staircase
The right path's not always clear, but it doesn't have to be10 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You are very clever and also very skilful, there's no doubt about, genesis is the beginning but it's not the story, that is achieved between the birth and the goal, the thing I'm amazed with it's already been written, but we are still are yet write it, beautifully written Yvette, well done, blessings Roy
You are very clever and also very skilful, there's no doubt about, genesis is the beginning but it's not the story, that is achieved between the birth and the goal, the thing I'm amazed with it's already been written, but we are still are yet write it, beautifully written Yvette, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Daffodils are hardy flowers and always seem to brighten our path in spring as their bell-like heads seem to ring with faith and hope, I enjoyed your well chosen words Yvette, love Dolly x
Daffodils are hardy flowers and always seem to brighten our path in spring as their bell-like heads seem to ring with faith and hope, I enjoyed your well chosen words Yvette, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I enjoy your creativity in this introspective poem. You started with the personification of the stairs and then the shining daffodils, which was only bright phrase here in this poem. You should write about your long week.
Well done.
I enjoy your creativity in this introspective poem. You started with the personification of the stairs and then the shining daffodils, which was only bright phrase here in this poem. You should write about your long week.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
Comment from Sankey
Thanks for this "meandering" kind of poem. Lovely seeing the message of God's creation within, as well. The picture certainly goes well with your poem. Can't say I have seen you around for a while but perhaps it is I that has been remiss in not noticing you.
Thanks for this "meandering" kind of poem. Lovely seeing the message of God's creation within, as well. The picture certainly goes well with your poem. Can't say I have seen you around for a while but perhaps it is I that has been remiss in not noticing you.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from June Sargent
Sometimes the path that looks the least appealing or inviting is the one we should take. Where it leads is not the main concern - as what we learn along the way. Enlightenment is not a destination - but a journey.
Sometimes the path that looks the least appealing or inviting is the one we should take. Where it leads is not the main concern - as what we learn along the way. Enlightenment is not a destination - but a journey.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
I enjoyed the flow of this poem, the creativity that leaves readers wondering the spirituality behind the poem. Thanks for sharing your imagination. Well done.
I enjoyed the flow of this poem, the creativity that leaves readers wondering the spirituality behind the poem. Thanks for sharing your imagination. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
The Message that I got from your poem is the narrow path to God. Not always the widest, the most clear or well traveled. The line I enjoyed the most was: ""Look here!" Those daffodils exclaim with not eyes but spirit's touch..."
The Message that I got from your poem is the narrow path to God. Not always the widest, the most clear or well traveled. The line I enjoyed the most was: ""Look here!" Those daffodils exclaim with not eyes but spirit's touch..."
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this! It makes me think how all of us are "bathed in brokenness" in this world and life on earth, in general. But each step we draw closer to the top of the hill when we've learned love and compassion as He modeled for us. Virtual six!
Loved this! It makes me think how all of us are "bathed in brokenness" in this world and life on earth, in general. But each step we draw closer to the top of the hill when we've learned love and compassion as He modeled for us. Virtual six!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I enjoyed it the first time, then, after reading your Author's Notes, tried it again and this time I felt the full impact of what lay between the lines. I'm so glad you're back on here, my little Southern Charmer, because you add such a deep and LITERARY presence to the site. This was exceptional...but of course it would be, since that's all you really know how to do.
xoxoxo
I enjoyed it the first time, then, after reading your Author's Notes, tried it again and this time I felt the full impact of what lay between the lines. I'm so glad you're back on here, my little Southern Charmer, because you add such a deep and LITERARY presence to the site. This was exceptional...but of course it would be, since that's all you really know how to do.
xoxoxo
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Yvonne,
Your poem is so profound. I love your theme
Your last for phrases, starting with, "for 'tis..." are both comforting and in par with living life.
Excellent poem, Yvonne
Best wishes!
Cindy
Yvonne,
Your poem is so profound. I love your theme
Your last for phrases, starting with, "for 'tis..." are both comforting and in par with living life.
Excellent poem, Yvonne
Best wishes!
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024