2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Lying on the Grass, has the proper formatting and captures the lazy and soothing moments as the universe revolves above us and we ride along for free.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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This haiku, Lying on the Grass, has the proper formatting and captures the lazy and soothing moments as the universe revolves above us and we ride along for free.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, for the days of lying in a field... gonna have to try it again sometime! ;) A wonderful haiku that sings to the little child in all of us...complete with peekaboo! ;) Thanx for sharing, Lady G! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Oh, for the days of lying in a field... gonna have to try it again sometime! ;) A wonderful haiku that sings to the little child in all of us...complete with peekaboo! ;) Thanx for sharing, Lady G! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
well, as long as there is a blanket to lie on top of the grass
grass makes me itchy lol
nice tipped pic - looks like the kid is rolling down the grassy hill playing peek-a-boo with the sun...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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well, as long as there is a blanket to lie on top of the grass
grass makes me itchy lol
nice tipped pic - looks like the kid is rolling down the grassy hill playing peek-a-boo with the sun...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
We all that image on a warm summer or autumn day - wonderful!
Do like the artwork you paired with your verse.
edit possibility?:
watching clouds pass (sic) by ??
Mark
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Gypsy,
We all that image on a warm summer or autumn day - wonderful!
Do like the artwork you paired with your verse.
edit possibility?:
watching clouds pass (sic) by ??
Mark
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It's during this autumn weather that we certainly feel like the sun is playing peekaboo. We have been having scattered showers for a week now and probably more rain to come. But in your poem and picture, the clouds and sun are playing without the rain!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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It's during this autumn weather that we certainly feel like the sun is playing peekaboo. We have been having scattered showers for a week now and probably more rain to come. But in your poem and picture, the clouds and sun are playing without the rain!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Marival ❤️
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
How absolutely charming with those brightest of colours! I could really imagine myself in his position while the angle of the ground enhanced the dreaminess of the verse's message. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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How absolutely charming with those brightest of colours! I could really imagine myself in his position while the angle of the ground enhanced the dreaminess of the verse's message. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs