Fate in the Moonlight
Chapter 1: A Twist of Fate, Chapter 2 Stars' Unwelcome Bond8 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
A very good entry for the contest. Love the dialogue between the protagonists and the imagination you have utilized in evolving the story. I look forward to more.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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A very good entry for the contest. Love the dialogue between the protagonists and the imagination you have utilized in evolving the story. I look forward to more.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, This is my first love story and I'n having a blast writing it so very glad you enjoy it
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What an intense story! You've woven so much emotion into each moment. I love how the connection between them evolves. I loved the ending. It was so thoughtful. It's as if they're not just fighting together but healing together in a way - brilliantly done!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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What an intense story! You've woven so much emotion into each moment. I love how the connection between them evolves. I loved the ending. It was so thoughtful. It's as if they're not just fighting together but healing together in a way - brilliantly done!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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thank you
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is such a lovely story. The events are unique and as always, you've left me wanting more. Great job! As I always say, happy writing my friend!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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This is such a lovely story. The events are unique and as always, you've left me wanting more. Great job! As I always say, happy writing my friend!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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thank you, but did you notice i had to get a little bit of the thriller in there?
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Yes I did! I can't to read more!
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing about this book. It reads like the jacket of a book. Did you write the book? Is it published?
For the Romance Writing contest, I think they are looking more for the whole story of the lovers including how the story ends.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing about this book. It reads like the jacket of a book. Did you write the book? Is it published?
For the Romance Writing contest, I think they are looking more for the whole story of the lovers including how the story ends.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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actually it is just a teaser of what was coming, I posted chapter 1 with it today! I wasjust being a bit of a stinker,I will print another chapter tomorrow tooand so on
Comment from royowen
This sounds like a marvellous line of writing. Who doesn't like the stories of mystical people in strange lands, with creatures of fascinating origins and people and quests of amazing tasks and adventures, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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This sounds like a marvellous line of writing. Who doesn't like the stories of mystical people in strange lands, with creatures of fascinating origins and people and quests of amazing tasks and adventures, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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actually it is just a teaser of what was coming, I posted chapter 1 with it today! I was just being a bit of a stinker,I will print another chapter tomorrow tooa nd so on
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Well done
Comment from Begin Again
What a fantastic tease for a Romantic Story filled with intrigue, mystery and enchantment. is this something you are going to pursue or have you already written it? Sounds great to me.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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What a fantastic tease for a Romantic Story filled with intrigue, mystery and enchantment. is this something you are going to pursue or have you already written it? Sounds great to me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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actually it is just a teaser of what was coming, I posted chapter 1 with it today! I was just being a bit of a stinker,I will print another chapter tomorrow too and so on. but see, I couldn't leave my thriller roots behind I had to put a little of it in there,lol
Comment from Gianna Jones
I love this very riveting introduction to a story. The picture helped me immensely in being able to visualize what I was reading about Mira and Faylen. I think that this plot line would be a great idea for a series of novels.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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I love this very riveting introduction to a story. The picture helped me immensely in being able to visualize what I was reading about Mira and Faylen. I think that this plot line would be a great idea for a series of novels.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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actually it is just a teaser of what was coming, I posted chapter 1 with it today! I was just being a bit of a stinker, I will print another chapter tomorrow too and so on
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting approach to the Romance contest... an introduction to your book! Great thinking and the book sounds wonderfully intriguing! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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An interesting approach to the Romance contest... an introduction to your book! Great thinking and the book sounds wonderfully intriguing! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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actually it is just a teaser of what was coming, I posted chapter 1 with it today! I was just being a bit of a stinker, will print another chapter tomorrow too and so on