I saw a Hummingbird
A nonet poem15 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patricia
Nicely done nonet about the hummingbird's breakfast. I like how you matched the background with the color of the flower. It is a nice thing to see first thing in the morning.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Hi Patricia
Nicely done nonet about the hummingbird's breakfast. I like how you matched the background with the color of the flower. It is a nice thing to see first thing in the morning.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your review
Comment from GWHARGIS
I had a hummingbird nest in a tree by my upstairs porch this summer. It's tiny but was big enough for the little egg and hatchling. I'll be seeing that did make your heart fill with joy. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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I had a hummingbird nest in a tree by my upstairs porch this summer. It's tiny but was big enough for the little egg and hatchling. I'll be seeing that did make your heart fill with joy. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Your reviews are always special and I thank you so much for this one
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-A well written nonet with a good topic.
-Very good nature imagery with the sunrise,
the humming bird, and the flower.
-Effective use of alliteration as the
hummingbird enjoyed the nectar.
-Very good closing lines.
-I enjoyed reading your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-A well written nonet with a good topic.
-Very good nature imagery with the sunrise,
the humming bird, and the flower.
-Effective use of alliteration as the
hummingbird enjoyed the nectar.
-Very good closing lines.
-I enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. It is appreciated
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You are very welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Those hummingbirds are lovely even if they are really aggressive with one another. The speed of their flight is amazing. Another creature of God's marvelous creative genius!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Those hummingbirds are lovely even if they are really aggressive with one another. The speed of their flight is amazing. Another creature of God's marvelous creative genius!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is very much appreciate
Comment from Lisa Carter1
I love the hummingbird it is my favorite bird of all time! My son's grandfather was from Puerto Rico and this is the state bird! The picture is very beautiful
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I love the hummingbird it is my favorite bird of all time! My son's grandfather was from Puerto Rico and this is the state bird! The picture is very beautiful
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much Lisa for your very kind review. I appreciate it very much and I wish you a very good evening.
Comment from jim vecchio
A butterfly is a great creation of God to view anywhere, especially as your first sight of the day. Thank you for another cute picture and the appropriate words to go with it.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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A butterfly is a great creation of God to view anywhere, especially as your first sight of the day. Thank you for another cute picture and the appropriate words to go with it.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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thank you for taking the time to read and review at work I
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My pleasure.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a delightful nonet, Patricia. The presentation is lovely, and the picture is beautiful. Your syllable counts are perfect also. Yes, these beautiful little birds can warm our hearts. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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This is a delightful nonet, Patricia. The presentation is lovely, and the picture is beautiful. Your syllable counts are perfect also. Yes, these beautiful little birds can warm our hearts. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving a nice comment and it is
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You're welcome. I hope you're doing well and feeling stronger. Enjoy the weekend.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful rendering that celebrate a creature that is quite dear to me. My grandma had flower garden, and watching hummingbirds were something we shared.
Nicely done. Thanks fir tge memories
RJ
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Beautiful rendering that celebrate a creature that is quite dear to me. My grandma had flower garden, and watching hummingbirds were something we shared.
Nicely done. Thanks fir tge memories
RJ
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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With gratitude to my heart, I wish to thank you for a nice review.
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How lovely to see such a wonderful sight Patricia, I have never seen a hummingbird before except on fail, they are tiny pretty birds, your nonet pays tribute to them here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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How lovely to see such a wonderful sight Patricia, I have never seen a hummingbird before except on fail, they are tiny pretty birds, your nonet pays tribute to them here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this thank you
Comment from Me and Erin G
Hello Pat,
Great job on the nonet poem format. I love how you are trying new formats to express your artistic talents.
Awakening to a hummingbird outside your bedroom window is something that everyone should experience.
Lovely.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hello Pat,
Great job on the nonet poem format. I love how you are trying new formats to express your artistic talents.
Awakening to a hummingbird outside your bedroom window is something that everyone should experience.
Lovely.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it so much.
