Red Stains
A horror flash fiction2 total reviews
Comment from marilyn quillen
hmmmm, ok but now I want more, you got it started, you got my interest, now put me out of my misery and give me the rest!!! You are a very talented writer/story teller, you have everything it takes. great job
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hmmmm, ok but now I want more, you got it started, you got my interest, now put me out of my misery and give me the rest!!! You are a very talented writer/story teller, you have everything it takes. great job
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! Wow, it's a good first post! It really captures a sense of tension and fear! The idea of the mist turning into "suffocating poison gas" is horrible. The ending left me with a chill. This is gripping and beautifully written - keep it up! I look forward to more from you!
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Congrats on your first post! Wow, it's a good first post! It really captures a sense of tension and fear! The idea of the mist turning into "suffocating poison gas" is horrible. The ending left me with a chill. This is gripping and beautifully written - keep it up! I look forward to more from you!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024